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Gauto_LanceLv113yrGauto_Lance

Well it is a great story, nice details and such, although a bit too much drama for my tastes. Still I noticed that you included some details in starbound mods that actually make sense. Although their is a detail I noticed, I don't believe Novakids have mouths. And there are a few spelling errors scattered around. Still not bad, definitely something to read.

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Starbound: A Space Odyssey

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Thanks for the review. Yes, I made some changes in the Lore, as well in the physical appearance and behavior of some races. I made the changes so that it could fit better in the story I was telling and other changes were just for the convenience of writing.