PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREM DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREM DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREM DON' MAKE THIS A HAREM DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREM BECAUSE IT WILL RUIN THE STORY IT'S LIKE OUT OF THE FLOW SO PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS A HAREME NOVEL THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR YOUR HARD WORK AND PLEASE LISTEN to my suggestion or advice THANK YOU PLEASE ALWAYS WORK HARD I SUPPORT YOU

Cam from harem sect to give you blessings LONG LIVE HAREM LONG LIVE HAREM LONG LIVE HAREM LONG LIVE HAREM LONG LIVE HAREM LONG LIVE HAREM

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rushed opness with an empty protag (side characters have more emotion an 'feel' more like people then the protag). many of the 'gifts' given too him seem to have been unlocked right after he was born yet the information given before his rebirth said many of them would be locked until he meets some requirements which included reaching certain levels as a ninja...the abused skill max ticket killed a lot of development along authors dream of a normal person in a few years actual making a combat style from nothing fighting only himself while having a toddlers body ruin much in the way of story character and plot development as he actual grows and makes use of the genius perks he had to grow overconfident only to be beaten by a clan raised kid or one with a active bloodline ability (eyes, mixed elements, unique bodies)..this type of plot lines would actual let him grow with emotions and not just a story that goes "ohh i know this world like the back of my hand and i got this system with these op perks that lets me do anything faster then others so i do not need to care about anything and noone would be able to teach me s**t and i am so powerful and smart i will just get out of any situation due to my system and thing i buy from it" after all madera and the zetsu are still active at this part of the story and he just goes running out the village at only false genin level (he does not have any real ninja training so he can not call himself a genin or even a ninja since he technically is just a normal citizen with lots of chakra)

I like the concept of how the story has developed so far. The main character is OP, but hey its a fanfic, its not supposed to be logical. If anyone has a problem with this story, please keep it to yourself. Keep up the good work with this story. And one last thing, I WANT MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL TAKE YOUR TIME IF YOU NEED IT, AND PLEASE DO NOT DROP THIS!!!!!!!

Mc = kekkai genkai are like cheats so i don't need'em God = ( then why buy all those perks idiot )( ( it's good i forgot about him) MC = hypocritical mongrel

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Loving the story so far. The only things I would say that needs a bit of work is the development between the protagonist and the world around him. The main changing his appearance for the sake of exploring other places. I would also prefer it if the protagonist took more time to develop the world around him without changing his appearence or exploring. I like the idea of the protagonist growing his relationship with his mother while he grows up instead of being instantly attached to her, it just makes their relationship seem rushed and pointless. But, if you exclude the before mentioned points it seems like a great start to the story. Keep up the good work.

Great work 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Few mistakes, long chapters, interesting setting and good language. Keep up the work! Hoping for more to come and am looking forward to the progress of this story. Ps. I love Naruto series <3