Review Detail of Mile in World God Empress

like ur story....... but i dont really like ur battle scene,u really need to descript(picture it) the skill they use not just the skill name!this make ur battle scene boring to read Ex:skill Arrows Shower there is few possibility how the skill itself is used 1.someone fire 1 arrow n the arrow will multiple itself(like kagebunshin) 2.or the ****** one,just fire multiple arrow in the same time looks ****** but very important for me,we r reading not watching!! ofc u dont need to explain everything sometime u need to "show" it Good luck n Thanks~!