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Bloody_Knyte
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2020-01-30 04:00

I love this story!!! I can't put it down, even at work. I can't wait for the next update and I hope to see more stories from you. Only suggestions I have is to maybe be more descriptive with the characters features. Thank you for your writing. I hope to eventually have my own story written soon, and look forward to seeing the feedback.

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ljack_ace
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Wow, thank you very much for the observation. YES! I do agree with it. Since this is my first writing experience, I am learning it as I write and yeah, that's why I am going back to the old volumes to brightening them up more. Volume 2 has the moments of describing the features, which I would update with new version. Once it is done, I think it will look good. I hope to continue to grow and keep writing better. Thanks for the review! I see that you have an interest in telling a story as well. Best wishes, and just do it when it feels right to tell the story. Because the more you invest in it, the more you will bounce back to work hard even when you face a writer's block. So, do it and let me know, I'll be glad to read it and show my support! Take care!

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