It's douluo dalu fanfic, definitely 5 stars from me. Hope you don't drop it. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

The narration of this story is kind of pale, it lacks the depth of the narrative, everything is somehow superficially served. At the moment, there is completely no emotional component in the characters. They (characters) look like soulless dolls, dialogues, behavior are simply made according to a template (boring, monotonous), this story looks like a draft or as if AI is writing. I do not recommend reading it, for so many chapters there is no clear plot, no elaboration of characters here. If you only like peering with Mira, then you can read. Otherwise below average at the moment. The reviews are also strange here, this time is not informative, it looks more like a cheat, and some even relate to another work.

I like your story beside you came from indonesian too. So, i think your writing quality is good enough and i hope you don't rushed the story because it can make your story full of chaotic...

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