Review Detail of Nightmare_Hydra in Spiderman Ultimate Peter Parker

Very good so far. Though I wish there was more "Day Time" written. As in there are to many time skips. Like there's only a few sentences then its the next day. Then a few more sentences then a weeks passed. While at the dojo a few paragraphs then 3 months passed. Its to fast I guess is what I'm getting at. I would like it if there was more to their day instead of training then some kisses and now bed time. The days over. Now its the next day. All summed in 2 pages. It needs more detail is what I'm getting at. Besides that its awesome. I love it. Keep up the good work. Writing quality: Exelent. Stability of updates: 5 chapters in 2 days. Very good. Story Development: Good but like I said it needs more detail. Character Design: Good but once again it needs detail. Like we know MJ has a sexy body but we really don't know what she looks like. What color hair? How long is her hair? Color of her eyes? Little nose? Same with parker. Though I do like his nickname that MJ calls him. "Tiger". World Background: Duh it's the marvel universe with but a slight twist. So I say its good. But it wouldn't hurt with a little detail. Hope this helps. -HYDRA