Review Detail of LetsBeReal in Desolate Mage: A Legend Reborn!

I am leaving an honest review even tho the way the author dealt with the 'spam' from the one user left a really bad taste in my mouth. Delete the alt reviews, but not even leave the first review they left? It was their honest opinion, just deleted because it was top voted ...and the author has left THREE 5*star reviews on their own novel....undeleted...HAHA Anyway: MC is so passive. And emo, it actually kills. He legit wallows in self pity and doesn't do crap even tho he's a legendary mage. Oh, he is also cheated on TWICE. I can't sympathise with any of the characters. Too many POV changes that don't add to the story. Story development...*sigh* 30+ chapters in and where is the 'demon' he is supposed to contract? It's in the title and summary! Feels like even author doesn't know where the story is going. Also, so many semicolons. Everywhere. I'm pretty sure I saw 3 semicolons in ONE sentence early on and it's bad. Pls re-edit. Stability of updates is good. Would have been a good story, but too many things make you feel annoyed until at the end you just flip the table.