Item: Legend of the Gunslinger Mage
Rating: 1
Author: MyIncarnation

MyIncarnationLv36yr

2018-11-03 14:55

Simply too bad! One cliché behind the other .. Slap in the face? What a joke! Where is the content of this? Lose of total time! There's nothing clever about this garbage!

Legend of the Gunslinger Mage

ImBloo

4.2

82 Chs

Liked by 17 people

Replies41

TunaSwapChocoLv5

I just wanted to try this out... You? Are simply too bad! You again? Causing one cliché behind the other! Me? I'm gunna slap ya in the face and it ain't a joke! Wheres the content? READ THE F-ING NOVEL YA IDIOT! WASTE OF TIME?! YOU SHOULD BE THANKFUL I'M EVEN TAKING MY TIME TA LET YA KNOW THAT YOUR A FREAKING COCKROACH! You call this beautiful novel GARBAGE?! LET'S SEE WHO THE REAL TRASH IS! 'CAUSE I'M GUNNA TAKE YA TO THE DUMPSTER!!!!!!! WHERE YA BELONG!! Like I said, I just wanted to try this out...😊😊😊 No harm done, right? 😁😁😁

6yr

Inmortal_DogLv5

good answer

TunaSwapChoco:I just wanted to try this out... You? Are simply too bad! You again? Causing one cliché behind the other! Me? I'm gunna slap ya in the face and it ain't a joke! Wheres the content? READ THE F-ING NOVEL YA IDIOT! WASTE OF TIME?! YOU SHOULD BE THANKFUL I'M EVEN TAKING MY TIME TA LET YA KNOW THAT YOUR A FREAKING COCKROACH! You call this beautiful novel GARBAGE?! LET'S SEE WHO THE REAL TRASH IS! 'CAUSE I'M GUNNA TAKE YA TO THE DUMPSTER!!!!!!! WHERE YA BELONG!! Like I said, I just wanted to try this out...😊😊😊 No harm done, right? 😁😁😁

6yr

BookReader1200Lv4

Lol

TunaSwapChoco:I just wanted to try this out... You? Are simply too bad! You again? Causing one cliché behind the other! Me? I'm gunna slap ya in the face and it ain't a joke! Wheres the content? READ THE F-ING NOVEL YA IDIOT! WASTE OF TIME?! YOU SHOULD BE THANKFUL I'M EVEN TAKING MY TIME TA LET YA KNOW THAT YOUR A FREAKING COCKROACH! You call this beautiful novel GARBAGE?! LET'S SEE WHO THE REAL TRASH IS! 'CAUSE I'M GUNNA TAKE YA TO THE DUMPSTER!!!!!!! WHERE YA BELONG!! Like I said, I just wanted to try this out...😊😊😊 No harm done, right? 😁😁😁

6yr

OnlyEternityLv15

he sounds is like a bot

6yr

Patriarch_MeatbunLv6

you are one of those idiots who didn't even read it and do reviews.

6yr

NoelSenpaiLv5

Your lv 3 your word mean dog ****. No your place you peasant.

6yr

theanimemailLv10

lol hahahah

NoelSenpai:Your lv 3 your word mean dog ****. No your place you peasant.

6yr

ur_stupidityLv6

Ah. Well then enlighten us oh wise one to what truly non cliche **** you read. Everything has some cliche dumbass

6yr

the_fallen_watcherLv5

Why are the words of a level 3 worth shlt ??? just asking

NoelSenpai:Your lv 3 your word mean dog ****. No your place you peasant.

6yr

Earthshaker34Lv6

let him satisfy his ego, he is nothing but a pleb with superior complex

the_fallen_watcher:Why are the words of a level 3 worth shlt ??? just asking

6yr

the_fallen_watcherLv5

I was just wondering if he had a good reason you know like how it takes almost no time at all to get to level 4 or something but even then it just makes them a new account here you know

Earthshaker34:let him satisfy his ego, he is nothing but a pleb with superior complex

6yr

sistercourtneyLv10

Wow..... ur really rude........

6yr

Cooper_GangLv5

usually the ones who give bad reviews for no reason are lvl 1-3. Trolls

the_fallen_watcher:Why are the words of a level 3 worth shlt ??? just asking

6yr

the_fallen_watcherLv5

I can see that

Cooper_Gang:usually the ones who give bad reviews for no reason are lvl 1-3. Trolls

6yr

MadnezzLv5

lol I love how they added the "cultivation system" this site. It would be fun if levels were named after realms!

NoelSenpai:Your lv 3 your word mean dog ****. No your place you peasant.

6yr

MovingCorpseLv7

One of a few reasons I love webnovel is because their leveling system. Look at me, I'm lv 6 at the moment. "Talk to me again after you reach my level"(LOL)

NoelSenpai:Your lv 3 your word mean dog ****. No your place you peasant.

6yr

DeZunLv14

i really like the, "No(know) your place you peasant" *im a broad-minded person. we all make mistakes

NoelSenpai:Your lv 3 your word mean dog ****. No your place you peasant.

6yr

Cabbage_sellerLv3

One cliché "after another" not behind the other. 'Where is the content of this?' What does that even mean? Also I believe you meant "It's a total waste of time" rather whatever you said. Look, before you go judging a book, try to at least make your comment make sense.

6yr

sweetiepLv2

Just here to observe

6yr

DaoistLordLv5

The person who wrote this above comment doesn't belong here... This is a webnovel, especially one made by an aspiring writer, not a brilliant work of literature published or uploaded as books. I recommend the local library to suit your rich tastes. Thank and goodbye. Work hard author! We support your excellent attempt!!! And hope your quality keeps on and on improving!

6yr

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I'm following up and from what I've seen so far, it's a very generic theme with the same things that every cliche novel has ... When we say cliché it's not in the bad sense, it's simply that something new is missing, something that sets a novel apart from other. I think I've had enough of all these novels to tell the truth. Sigh...

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I'm done with it. Beginning to be repetitive and without new ideas. I just regretted wasting my time reading this! Anyway, good luck and do not get discouraged with my insignificant comment, only each one has its own taste.

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