Review Detail of HavenlyJeep in Survival to Godhood
Review detail
Writing Quality: (3/5) - The very second chapter throws me off. You DO NOT put an action like *sniff* WITHIN a dialogue. Put it after or before to indicate that Leo is doing that. Otherwise, an okay grammar and I don't have to read sentences twice to understand it. Story: (4/5) - Cultivation. Enough said. Character: (3/5) - Need more description on the characters for the readers to imagine how they look. Please, author, give each character's enough description when first introducing them. World: (4/5) - A world where its all survival to the fittest. Oh I forgot to mention the MC has a system, so there's that. Need more background descriptions.
Survival to Godhood
killermniko
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Thanks I wish you would've starred them as you rated them. I prefer honest assessments with stars. So the noises in quatations will not change. That is the style writing I chose after a few books I have read. The character thing I will try to work on, I will look back on the main characters and update them. At the same time I don't like the over explanation most stories on webnovel give. I will look for a balance. Thanks for the review though.