Writing Quality: there were a number of spelling mistakes and grammar issue but overall I could still understand the content if I read it carefully. E.g. in ch 14, u said he caught he breathe... I was thinking u wanted to say he caught his breath. Stability of updates: Perfect! I saw u released regularly. Story development and the world background seemed fine. Could be better. However, I was having a hard time following up with unit numbers. I still give u 4* as I think that's probably just my personal issue. Cheers and well done :)
killermniko
Liked it!
LIKEThanks for a good review. I'll go update chapter 14 with the fix. Wish you would have given more on the story and background. I'm actually using unit numbers to take away their individuality. I did that because that's what Star Wars did with the storm troopers and liked that idea. Anyways, thanks again for the review.