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This at first seemed good, but then it just got weird as the characters started acting not like how they were set up to be. The aloof and nonchalant MC was likable at the start, but now he's just "alright". He basically showed no interest in his childhood friend up until around chapter 19 or 20, but then out of nowhere, they are in a relationship? He started to lust after her and I quote "undress her with his eyes". The childhood friend even said that such a man that wanted her like the other men would not be able to steal her heart, but then literally next second gives him a kiss and lets him do what he wants with her. Kinda stupid. Also, everything is really confusing, I mean I can barely understand what's happening most of the time, especially the prologue, the prologue doesn't even need to be there, the story makes more sense without it for most of the chapters. I think the idea of the novel is pretty cool, but it is executed poorly. Also, the author likes to use a lot of derogatory words such as "nigga", this constant use of the word made me feel uncomfortable. I mean like seriously, there is no need to say those words. I'm of a darker skin color myself and speak in a very... rude or inappropriate way I guess (I swear a lot, I mean a **** ton of swearing), but I never say that word. Another reason why I'm giving this novel a bad review is that I think that the author has deleted some reviews to get a perfect 5-star rating.

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