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Drthrottlejr
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2018-10-24 07:13

I've only read 6 chapters so far, but i can already tell its going to be a good story. Author, please don't drop this. You might not get a lot of people in the first few days to couple weeks, but with a story that's really good so far, they will flock to it soon enough. Also, don't forget to Incorporate the classic george rr martin story telling style. Dont want the mc to have it too easy.

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also, not to critique, but from the novels i've read, they usually do more timeskips than necesary. dont make the same mistake, if you don't know what to do, ask your readers. the story is yours to tell, but it doesn't hurt to have the opinion of others every once in a while.

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