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Kovacs06
Kovacs06Lv46yr
2018-10-28 17:21

I'm a fan of GOT so i really like this novel MC is op but that's ok. I wish you could make your chapter release 2/day if you can't it is ok as long as there's a release I'll vote for this novel everyday 馃憤馃憤馃憤

Viserys Targaryen with a system (SI)

GudBrown
4.5
9 Chs

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Iehdfdttwkhyd
IehdfdttwkhydLv2

5 star for me but could you please somehow turn it to a harem it's game of thrones after all MC already stated that he will have a harem (don't want an ****** we have Jamie and Cersei for that part 馃槒). Can't wait for Tyrion Lannister to appear 馃槨馃槑

6yr

_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

This story is aimed for the younger readers, but it's a fanfic of the Game of thrones, so M.C has to be a bit more cruel. Like seriously. It won't make any sense if his mentality stays the same as a kid from earth, specially since he has seen the cruelty of that world. Why is the title 'kingslayer', bad.? He cares about a fuckin' title so much that he can see his own mother being violated.? That was just one of the examples. Shouldn't have chosen the game of thrones if there were going to be that many timeskips. The action scenes are not as detail as you would expect from a game of thrones fanfic either.!

6yr
SlyMonster
SlyMonsterLv6

This feels more like a draft than anything else. The action is rushed, worldbuilding too fast, and the time skip too brutal. I advise to scrap it and redo it properly

6yr
Chick_Thief
Chick_ThiefLv12

This story is cool so continue. Game of Thrones in fanfiction is cool and as an author you do a good job and there is a good development for the story so continue

6yr
Darksom
DarksomLv4

Sorry to inform all of you readers that the author have passed away. I will be the first to miss him. Our prayers are with you and your family. Thanks again for your work.馃樁

6yr
Xenoblubber
XenoblubberLv4

Reveal spoiler

6yr
SPECTRALE
SPECTRALELv5

i was excited to read this fanfic, but was a little disappointed, it is not that bad, but i found that the story was too rushed and fast paced, plus the writing was a little childish. i read the fanfic that inspired you, and it was one of the best, so maybe it influenced me into having too high of an expectation to your story, but i believe that you will continue improving as you write so don't give up.

6yr
yahska
yahskaLv6

Great fanfiction. The mc is as op as a normal human can be (only thing magical about him is that he can use dragon fire) and i like it. Hope it's not dropped. .........................................................................................................

6yr
YoungestKing
YoungestKingLv11

This is beautiful.... pls dont stop writing because it is truly oh too beautiful. pls also as a suggestion he should have planted his own spies over the last few years in Westeros including the tyrells

6yr
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