Review Detail of GrampZ in I Refuse to Become Scumbag in Tokyo

Bro I will tell you some of my personal frustrations, as well as I won't mind if my comment displeases some fans of Akikan's work, but this story made me so angry that I wanted to comment on it and give a review about it.. (sorry if my spelling is incorrect, as I can't speak English :-; ). Okay, let's start this story, a basic concept presented by several other authors, but because it's basic it's not bad, but what the author will do with it throughout the entire work and I can even say that I liked it at first, to the point of I comment on the chapters and give ''Power Stone''. (I had already seen other Akikan stories and thought he really had an interesting creativity, until I found out that in this story he practically took the plot of another story from China and created on top of it without even giving the least credit on the page fanfic's initial '-' ) Another thing I found interesting is that there are several fanfics with this theme where it brings together several romance and school life animes in the same world, but I realized that they are all very similar from the writing and even the story, however Akikan can diversify from these others... But something that let me down is the main character's lack of charisma and even how all the girls fall in love with him for simple silly reasons, as well as his lack of the overall background. This work simply arrived at a point where Shishio gained some skill thanks to one of his girlfriends and was in this vicious cycle where it would be like this: Girl= Potential for some skill= Will become Shisio's girlfriend= Shishio becomes richer, stronger, handsome...= more girls. Oh really? Like I think I've advanced a little in the criticism, so let's go back a little... Shishio wins a system gets girls and that's it? Honestly, I don't even know where to start criticizing, apart from the fact that I think other readers would like to see the main character having more characteristics without being a perfect guy (I'm pretty sure that if you have someone with the patience to read all this, at least least must have several flaws. For example just reading all this LOL :)... _) I would like more if it detailed the world itself, showing clearly about what surrounds it and even something simpler like the characteristics of the girls where it really had the minimum of focus and it wasn't just several girls wanting the attention of the main character. A long-term problem of the work would also be this HUGE money and INCREDIBLE skills, like I really want to see this author succeed in the future to make people not get tired of seeing the protagonist manage to do everything and have everything at his disposal. Speaking of which, something that is seriously lacking in these stories is having some event in the story that is interesting no matter how small (other than Shishio picking up girls and GG), as well as having some ''problems'' that the main character has to face. If we are going to see every story considered good, it has some characteristics in common and one of them is that not everything goes right momentarily for the protagonist and in this work apparently it will be ''Gary Stu in the world of romance and school life anime''. Sorry if my review was bad, I just typed and went :)