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Argomi
ArgomiLv22yr
2022-02-08 12:24

Too much drama for a DxD FanFic. When people think of DxD, they think of Unique Characters, Strength Class, Harem and Beautiful Girls, as well as Modern Fantasy with Mythologies. However, when I tried to read it, I was soon surprised to read Hachiman with too much drama. There's nothing unique to the MC. No drive for power, Not that talented, having disadvantages for having A Dragon-Type Sacred Gear as well as having literal 'mental damages'. I fear that a Netorare might even happen where Rias and Akeno abandon MC for Issei since he's literally the best version of MC. He's charismatic, better sacred-gear, has a massive dream and his hunger for it as well as talent, potential, and mental strength. I really do hope that MC would find his dream where he would literally do anything for it. Wasting time in a DxD World is a big no-no for Hachiman since he isn't really that talented. I know that he's damaged on the inside but please do hope to find some good reasons to make Hachiman better.

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NimtheWriter
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Hmmm, I see where ya coming from and I'm sorry MC was not to your liking. I can't really write a super happy go lucky Hachiman. He has flaws which I'm well aware of, he lacks the same drive as Issei, he's not an op character. But he is a hardworking person, and I wanted to showcase this. Hachiman wants to change and is changing, and with time he'll continue improving both power wise and personality wise. If it helps, there won't ever be a ntr thing in this fic, but I know you didn't mean it that way. Hachiman was not chosen to replace Issei since the boy exists, he is not made to become a harem king cause he is not Issei. He wants only one thing and that is too live and bring back Vritra...and that might happen sooner than y'all think. Chapters may seem a bit dark now, but it'll change with the upcoming chapters. Still, I'm sorry I couldn't write a suitable character to your liking...let's see if the future chapter rekindle your interest in my fic.

Leylin_123
Leylin_123Lv14

no te preocupes, en estos fanfics que son de MC oscuros y depresivos, cuando se nota desde el comienzo ese esfuerzo por cambiar y mejorarse a si mismo, por lo general lo mejor es al menos leer varios arcos o volumenes para poder ver el impacto general y determinar si en realidad vale la pena. por lo que lo unico que dire es que mejor lean cada uno a su gusto y no se vayan con dudas pendientes.

NimtheWriter:Hmmm, I see where ya coming from and I'm sorry MC was not to your liking. I can't really write a super happy go lucky Hachiman. He has flaws which I'm well aware of, he lacks the same drive as Issei, he's not an op character. But he is a hardworking person, and I wanted to showcase this. Hachiman wants to change and is changing, and with time he'll continue improving both power wise and personality wise. If it helps, there won't ever be a ntr thing in this fic, but I know you didn't mean it that way. Hachiman was not chosen to replace Issei since the boy exists, he is not made to become a harem king cause he is not Issei. He wants only one thing and that is too live and bring back Vritra...and that might happen sooner than y'all think. Chapters may seem a bit dark now, but it'll change with the upcoming chapters. Still, I'm sorry I couldn't write a suitable character to your liking...let's see if the future chapter rekindle your interest in my fic.
Phase_MorningStar
Phase_MorningStarLv3

To Me Issei Isn't Charismatic And Issei's Sacred Gear Can't Be Called Better Because If The Mc Is Smart Enough He Can Use Power Negation Of Vitra To Negate Boost And Also Mc Can Absorb Other's Power And Vitra's Fire Can Also Curse And Issei Doesn't Have That Massive Dream He Only Wants A Harem And Issei Talent Isn't The Best Because In IDk EP Said That He Has Low Magic And In Terms Of Potential No One Knows And In Terms Of Mental I Think The Mc Wins On That Because Mc Has A Mature Mentality And Issei Has A Perverted Mentality

Argomi
ArgomiLv2

I looked at it at a Third-Point Perspective per se. Inside of the story, people would naturaly lean towards Issei since he had a Longinus, the strongest class of sacred gears. If you had watched Original Hachiman from his own anime, he's a proud "Loner", whilst Issei had friends and everyone in his school knew him as a Pervert, this gives out that he is much more charismatic than Hachiman. In their own dreams and how much they would sacrifice themselves for it, Isse is better since he would cassualy sacrifice a lim for his dream, whilst Hachiman on the otherhand didn't even had a dream. Taentwise, if you have read the novel itself, you would be able to know that Issei became a Super-Class being in less than a decade, much faster than Vali who literakly had the same sacred gear as Issei as well as the Lucifer Bloodline, Issei also manage to create many personal abilities which means, abilities he can only use. Mentalwise, Hachiman is depressed whilst Issei had hope for his dream, it doesnt matter if its having a dream of harem, its still a dream. You can see how better Issei is than Hachiman, but of course Issei here woulndt have his plot armor so we can already expect Hachiman would be better than him through time and effort, what I fear is the other characters in the story, they have emotions too, so it is safe to say that characters in the story is willing to antagonize Hachiman for Issei since he is better 'currently'.

Phase_MorningStar:To Me Issei Isn't Charismatic And Issei's Sacred Gear Can't Be Called Better Because If The Mc Is Smart Enough He Can Use Power Negation Of Vitra To Negate Boost And Also Mc Can Absorb Other's Power And Vitra's Fire Can Also Curse And Issei Doesn't Have That Massive Dream He Only Wants A Harem And Issei Talent Isn't The Best Because In IDk EP Said That He Has Low Magic And In Terms Of Potential No One Knows And In Terms Of Mental I Think The Mc Wins On That Because Mc Has A Mature Mentality And Issei Has A Perverted Mentality
Phase_MorningStar
Phase_MorningStarLv3

You Can't That Issei Is More Talented Because The Story Hadn't Said How Strong Hachiman Would End Up And Hachiman Dream's To Be A Household Husband But Still Counts As A Dream And In This FF Everyone In The Kuoh Highschool Knows Hachiman Because He Was Called The Dark Prince In The School And Also Helps People With His Club So You Can Say In This FF Hachiman Is More Charismatic

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