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Nale_Sheeeeeee
Nale_SheeeeeeeLv43yr
2021-12-04 21:01

Hehehe... this is good. Really good job portraying the characters, making it seem like alive and the world building as well, hnngh. I don't like nitpicking so I'm gonna end this here. Of course, there's bound to be problems, but I won't say anything about it. I can't find proper words to point those out, so I'll just let someone else do so. And as always, this isn't for everyone.(Honestly too early to make this review tho.)

My teenage high school romance comedy can't be this perverted!

NimtheWriter
4.5
97 Chs

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Nale_Sheeeeeee
Nale_SheeeeeeeLv4

'Cuz I can't*

3yr
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NimtheWriter
NimtheWriterAuthor

Thx for the review

Nale_Sheeeeeee:'Cuz I can't*
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NimtheWriter
NimtheWriterAuthor

Hi there~ Another shameless 4.8 stars review from myself. This is my first ever crossover fanfic with Oreigaru or snafu x DxD, the characters are all written as closely to their original counterparts while canon will not be followed. I try to make the storyline feel logical and not forced. Hey, if you liked it be sure to leave a review, share and donate the stones for more!

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Mr_mysterio
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to tell the truth, the writing is good and the personality of the characters is consistent with the original story and well that's the problem, average story at best, as the crossover isn't supported, making for an extremely boring story. the author had to look for other anime to cross or have changed the personality of the protagonist

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Argomi
ArgomiLv2

Too much drama for a DxD FanFic. When people think of DxD, they think of Unique Characters, Strength Class, Harem and Beautiful Girls, as well as Modern Fantasy with Mythologies. However, when I tried to read it, I was soon surprised to read Hachiman with too much drama. There's nothing unique to the MC. No drive for power, Not that talented, having disadvantages for having A Dragon-Type Sacred Gear as well as having literal 'mental damages'. I fear that a Netorare might even happen where Rias and Akeno abandon MC for Issei since he's literally the best version of MC. He's charismatic, better sacred-gear, has a massive dream and his hunger for it as well as talent, potential, and mental strength. I really do hope that MC would find his dream where he would literally do anything for it. Wasting time in a DxD World is a big no-no for Hachiman since he isn't really that talented. I know that he's damaged on the inside but please do hope to find some good reasons to make Hachiman better.

3yr
Devil023
Devil023Lv4

i was expecting something better but it was disappointing. Conversation are not good. even having the good plot the MC is such a irritating person.

3yr
ManofcultureQ_Q
ManofcultureQ_QLv4

This fic is great!! The author was able to show hachiman's character pretty nicely. All the characters are similar to their original selves. It really is a masterpiece in my eyes so keep it up Author-san and plz don't drop 馃馃

3yr
CarolineInPajama
CarolineInPajamaLv4

Underrated novel. Writing Quality is very satisfying Updates are slow... BUT don't drop it Story Development.. Its not that boring but not that good too... Character Design... Its very good, Rias became likable, Akeno too, well to put it on perspective they all have personalities. World Background? DxD and oregairu maybe there will be new anime.. Hope so.. But overall this novel is underrated. We need POWER STONES so Author-sama can UPDATE FASTER!!! Take my last POWER STONE!!!!

3yr
Capt_Eye_Collector
Capt_Eye_CollectorLv4

I hope you never drop this. This is my favorite dxd fanfic foe now. @#%@&$&@$##%%@%##%%@&#&#&#&@&&%#%@&@&@#%@%#%#%%#&#&@&&#&#&#&&#&##

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Azzadel
AzzadelLv4

this is a great novel that was well planned but sadly not for me. the mc just lacks a motive or drive to get stronger or maybe things would have been changed in the later chapters since I hadn't read past chapter 15

2yr
Melitia_Snek
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