Review Detail of EldritchLoki in Draconic Void

Hmm, I am doing this to kinda remind myself... Anywho, while the righting may be good, it could definitely be better. More thought needs to be put into the story and the basic plot needs to be thought out, for example... Planning the start of the story, the climax, and eventually the end. Then the events between those, last but not least how it will all be put together to make it fluid and like it's meant to be. Oh yeah, names need to be thought of before you even introduce a character, species either be it plant or animal, place, the same thing with certain events like wars and stuff. Never be unprepared or it will all go down, also come up with an update schedule it will help in the long run, plus the readers would be pleased.