InfernalRhageLv46yr

2018-10-29 04:53

I'm going to try to keep this short and sweet the story itself is not bad for a fan fiction with less than 10 chapters so far. I gave it a full 5 stars for both stability of updates and story development. So far the author has given us 7 chapters in less than a week which is great and the story is flowing along at a steady pace. Personally I feel the author could go back and flesh out his early development a bit more to show how he learned everything he did before the academy but that's just me nitpicking. I knocked off one star for character design and two stars on world background like I always do for fan fictions due to the majority of the characters not being original characters and just copying a pre-existing world. Yes you can argue that is just me nitpicking again but I don't feel it is fair to give someone full credit for just altering a pre-existing work. Lastly I took three stars off for writing quality due to all the errors present in the currently posted chapters. Everything from missing words to miss spelling words. While normally I would only take off one star for this the sheer number of errors in 7 chapters is ridiculous. Yes I understand english may not be the authors primary language all it would take is a bit of proof reading to spot some of these. To the author I went through as I was reading and made note of any spelling and grammer errors I found and listed them in the comments for each chapter along with suggested corrections for said errors. If you go through and correct said errors I will be more than happy to edit my review of the novel. For those checking the reviews before deciding to read this novel or not I will say it is a great novel so far for those who like way overpowered MCs from the start.

Son Of Madara Uchiha

ghosttown

4.2

34 Chs