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HeartRendLv66yr
2018-10-16 18:48

Love your story man, I hope you keep going! There are not a lot of stories with such nice grammar and flow. Even your story progress is well paced, not too slow and your MC is a retard that is physically 20 but mentally 5. Please keep going!

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HeartRendLv6

Sorry i meant your MC is *NOT* a retard lol

Evil_DragonAuthor

Ohh i was confused for a moment there

BattleformLv5

You're right! This mc is retarded! I really hate useless ntr bastard mc! The author should drop dead already!

AntonfireLv5

That made me laugh, what makes me laugh more the upvotes your review got.

HeartRend:Sorry i meant your MC is *NOT* a retard lol
NotNDLv10

Wow, this is kinda awkward...

Battleform:You're right! This mc is retarded! I really hate useless ntr bastard mc! The author should drop dead already!
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