Great Story but the plot has not much depth much of the storyline is covered VERY lightly. Would be a bit nicer if you include more fillers that could make us have a reaction to the story like the fillers in Sword Art Online.
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I can only apologize, because my english is really bad. I can't even understand what you mean in those words, can you explain it to me more clearer? 😅😅😅
Fillers are the parts of the story that do not need to be there for the story to be completed. Like in SAO inbetween the first arc and the second, they introduce lizbeth, silica and other people. And the part where kirito goes after the red players is also a filler. Not part of the main story and series can be finished without these stories but it is it is through these chapters that we get to know the character better.
Fillers are the parts of the story that do not need to be there for the story to be completed. Like in SAO inbetween the first arc and the second, they introduce lizbeth, silica and other people. And the part where kirito goes after the red players is also a filler. Not part of the main story and series can be finished without these stories but it is it is through these chapters that we get to know the character better.
Your doing great for someone who is not good at english. Keep up the good work. 😊
Look up on google if uou don't know what it is 😝
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