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Shaikh_Tohaa
Shaikh_TohaaAuthor5yr
2019-07-20 07:08

This is a rewrite of Businessman Naruto which I wrote before and stopped after 130+ chapters. That story was interesting and all but there are some things I wanted to change but at that place, it was quite impossible to do so I decided to start a new and try my best not to do the same mistake again. This one is indeed a Harem story but the way the MC gets the girls is quite reasonable so I think you will not be dissatisfied because of more than 1 woman as MC woman. So don't get negative without reading properly. Also, the writing quality might not be that good for some peoples as I don't reread the chapter after I am done writing because if I do I will have to update even shorter chapter then I update because if the lake of time. Anyway if you read I am sure you will like the overall story. Thanks anyway.

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Pinky_Pi
Pinky_PiLv3

i really enjoy your creativity :D but i think if you could find an editor~kun to help you polish out the awkwardness of your sentences you'd be next level. *-*

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

is Hinata part of the harem?

Melshan
MelshanLv7

Hinata is the best wife

DragonkingKyo:is Hinata part of the harem?
George_WEB
George_WEBLv6

Thanks I HAVE READEN THE FIRST VERSION AND WAS AWESOME SO PLEASE KEEP THE GOOD WORK AND THE LEGACY OF THE NEW BUSYNESS MAN NARUTO. HAPPY 2020.

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