webnovel
StaticHD
StaticHDLv126yr
2018-11-29 07:34

The writing quality (especially during the x-rated scenes) is superb. What really got me into the story was the way the author was able to describe how the MC did certain things and solve certain issues. Just hope he creates personal countermeatures for the system just in case things don't go as planned. Putting too much trust in an A.i-system always have backlashes in the end if one doesn't tread carefully. Considering he has his knowledge from Earth, he should be more cautious. I also wonder if he'll be able to return to his home Earth, and find out the real reasons or circumstances that ended in his favor. If he's living in an actual VR-game - will players start popping up in the later sequence of the story? And if they do, will he find an actual "player-version" of his trueself? And if a player-version of his trueself appears, will he be able to identify him and also merge with this playerself; thus, being able to control two bodies simultaneuosly in difference dimensions? Will he be able to bring items from the game into the real world using his game abilities? Will his game knowledge allow him to conquer the world and terraform other planets using fictional & unbelievable technology? Is he technically in a different timeline? Is his present circumstance an anomoly? This is what makes the story interesting. Because you can create your own speculations and it can ignite a flame into the story. It's very fast paced. And you can tell the author enjoys writing his story as well. YOU HAVE MY FULL SUPPORT.

Dominating Evolution of the Cosmos

JinFang
3.6
339 Chs

Liked by 4 people

LIKE
Replies3
WillMissQ
WillMissQLv13

Did u just say that the writing quality is “superb”? It’s trash. The author’s writing style for interactions between the characters is flat like a soda that has been opened and out, like two fat lesbians going at it. It’s horrible to watch. In the beginning, he can at least say that it’s because he’s new but then it’s like the author just gave up on each chapter being interesting and is just trying to push out chapters. There is no excitement especially during the scene where he tries to sell his serum. I can’t believe someone called this superb.

6yr
1
Pikotaro
PikotaroLv3

we've got a perv here :P

6yr
Pikotaro
PikotaroLv3

I have a feeling he's trolling. This whole review sounds fake XD

WillMissQ:Did u just say that the writing quality is “superb”? It’s trash. The author’s writing style for interactions between the characters is flat like a soda that has been opened and out, like two fat lesbians going at it. It’s horrible to watch. In the beginning, he can at least say that it’s because he’s new but then it’s like the author just gave up on each chapter being interesting and is just trying to push out chapters. There is no excitement especially during the scene where he tries to sell his serum. I can’t believe someone called this superb.
6yr
2
Other Reviews
Crow_OF_Judgement
Crow_OF_JudgementLv3

I read till chapter 8 and couldn't take it anymore. Here is the constructive criticism everyone in this website asks for if you give a novel 2 stars without a review (when clearly people are giving 5 stars without reading) English: nice Story: Not trying to be cliche but so totally cliche till chapter 8 Tournament plot, cultivation manuals, beauty takes interest cuz why not, Strong to weak with some random cheat Now here is a plot hole. (there are more but i don't wanna be too hard on the author since i think it is his first time writing lmao) Apparently played the game for but doesn't know anything about the game except the power system (was he a fking slave in the game? He doesn't know fking anything except the history) My disagreements. Every character acts like a person from your typical wuxia novel. Not gonna say anymore. Good luck. Bye bye.

6yr

Squeaky
SqueakyLv6

Reveal spoiler

6yr
ReviewBrah
ReviewBrahLv11

Let me give an example why i rate this. All the example happen in the chapter. 1. Author math skill is kindergarden. 2. There is no spatial ring but the enemy suddenly have a golem, a robot, a fkin laser gun in his ass. 3. which one is important your *** time or your family live ? In author case he choose ***. Smh. 4. Why the fk there is no screening when recruit a soldier. Why the fk a soldier can join private organization ? Do u want the military itself to collapse ? 5. The fighting in military base did not alert other. Even with a robot with nuclear energy blowing up. 6. The military base defence system is fkin weak that even summoning an evil spirit or in middle of the base did not alert their system defence. Not to mention no anti teleport defence. Wtf. Its a fkin military base not your fkin grandfather house.

6yr
AlmightyLord5th
AlmightyLord5thLv4

I don't like or dislike your story. Although I was disappointed that the story wasn't something special and was filled with cliches, I haven't anything overwhelmingly negative to say about the story. The MC is bland (so he's not overly annoying or great he's just there) the side characters are side characters. The world building is fine i guess. The reason why this story is a 2.5 (slightly below average) rather then a 3 (average) for me is the plot progression. Like I said the story is really cliche , and for many stories cliches are not always bad, but in the case of this specific story it's in your face bad. Things that should've been lengthened in small proportions for basic readers enjoyment like the 'romance' (if I can even call it that) happens way to quickly and way to forcefully. Also, yes I know the real world is filled with people who do things like *** quickly but this is a fantasy and not the real world. Overall before I go on a long tangent and bore the c-rap ( only way I can spell that without getting censored) i'd like instead to rap this review up. The story is not bad but it offers no memorial moments and I probably won't remember any of the characters names in t -minus 10 minutes. Yep already forgotten it.

6yr
Pebble_God
Pebble_GodLv14

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Moon_represent
Moon_representLv5

Just me but full of 5 star sparm that give no reason for their 5 star and I was not here to anger anybody but I will neutralize these sparm!!! FOR THE LEGION! FOR THE LEGION!! FOR THE LEGION!!! FOR THE LEGION!!!! 😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬

6yr
GGMissFortune
GGMissFortuneLv6

At this point I can't even tell if this is actually an original novel or a half-decent translation of a trashy mech/gene cultivation CN webnovel... MC still the same... And loves arguing with opponents in battle... is also complete trash who can't deal with returning enemy he already defeated... Thinks with his jiji too much Retarded weak MC thinks more about getting p**ssy than getting op and dominating the world with his system .............. ............... ......

6yr
King_Tyler
King_TylerLv12

The story was fine but this has they absolutely worst romance and harem I have ever seen how can u about to get raped and all ur most loved items get destroyed and ur sister is in the next room fucking and u fall in love with that guy instead of getting mad they didn’t help u dropped

5yr
Ominous
OminousLv5

The idea was good, but the shallowness of the characters and random events that fit into a wuxia novel, with the goal of making a passive, ***** MC OP is just sad. It was good in the first 5 chapters when the world was being introduced and that’s about it. Became utter garbage afterwards.

6yr
LionWannabe
LionWannabeLv12

You really have a good story backgroud, but its a shame that you can't develop your story well. As far as ch 81, you keep dumping "information". I think this kind of writting style is way too boring. No real development of story, just excessive amount of information. Even if you skip the "history" or some "information" it wouldn't affect the other stories, so until ch 81, i just read 2-3 page, and skimming the other excessive BS.

6yr
Related Stories

Armipotent

This is a work of fiction, any names, characters, stories or events, are fictitious! (Even the country in the story is just the author's fantasy as the author never visited those countries in the story) Armipotent is an archaic adjective meaning "strong in battle." Basically, it refers to someone who is physically tough in war. Originally, it was used to refer to the Roman god of war, Mars. ===================== Tang Shaoyang, an orphan who dropped out of the middle school to fight on the street as he found out school was useless for a penniless orphan like him. Tang Shaoyang dropped out of his school, fighting on the street, and made a name for himself. Berserker Tang from Youyouliucun. Afterward, Dragon Wing triad recruited him and everything was good for him. Even though the public deemed him as a tumor of society, Tang Shaoyang was having a decent life. Until one day, everything changed as an absurd and strange game started. "... Game starts! Stage one: Survival for The Fittest!" After the game started, zombies appeared out of nowhere. ... Ding! "You have killed 1000 zombies less than 24 hours since the game started! You gained 3 Talents!" Dong! "You may choose 3 Talents! please choose carefully!" Tang Shaoyang held his chin and mused what Talent he had to choose. "With Zombies appear everywhere, I need an infinite strength... this is one, I still need to choose 2 Talents more..." Then a lewd smile formed on his lips. "I want an infinite strength, charm and charisma to conquer women, and the last one, I want to upgrade my **** so I can please my women!" After saying this, Tang Shaoyang laughed aloud. "Hahaha, there's no way such talent exists... ehhhhh?!!!" Ding! Dong! "3 Talents are consumed! You have been granted Divine Body! Good Luck, Gamer Tang Shaoyang!" Tang Shaoyang immediately checked the detail of Divine Body. After a brief silence, he muttered unbelievably. "Such Talents really exist..." Note: I don't own the cover. If the creator wants me to take down the cover or put credit, please notify me by replying to my review at the Review section.

HotIce · Fantasy
4.4
1915 Chs

My SSS-Rank Class Is Blood Monarch!

'Divinity Online'. The new breakthrough in the Full-Immersion Virtual Reality technology. After decades of work, Divinity Corp had achieved the impossible. Creating a massive video game world that people can enter and live in as if it were Earth. Their goal was clear, to create a world other than Earth that we can call home. A place where the laws of reality vanish, and the true ceiling of power shifts completely. Naturally, the shockwave Divinity Online created across the entire globe was unlike anything else. Every single person has heard of it, even those who have had no interest in video games before. Giant corporations and even governments immediately rushed to start planning to invest in this new world and just like that, billions of people had their eyes on one single date: the 19th of July. *** Arthur, like everyone else, had heard of the game and was as excited as everyone else to try it, if not even more. With how much he grew bored of his life on earth, this fantasy world was like the divine call he had been searching for. However, there was a very small problem. He had no money to buy the machine required to access Divinity Online. His wretched life had turned him into a broke teenager with no parents, and no relatives. But, by some kind of luck, he got his hands on one of those machines. Not knowing what was awaiting him in that world, Arthur was simply seeking one thing... A new opportunity in life and to find a purpose he could work for when he had none so far. [Welcome to 'Divinity Online'.] [Assimilation Started...]

Frost_Bite8 · Fantasy
4.1
396 Chs

Strongest Superhuman System

Four years ago, the first-ever Armageddon Class Anima appeared on Earth, destroying everything that it touched and threatening the lives of the entire world's population! But along with it came Superhumans that had the blessing of mana. They rose up to fight against the Armageddon, and leading them was the strongest Superhuman, KING. After two days and three nights of nonstop battle, KING gave his life to stop the Armageddon and give the Superhumans a fighting chance against the invading Anima, and everyone in the world remembers his good deeds and sacrifice! ... Mark was just an average Superhuman living in City A. His daily routine was skipping classes and hanging out with his only two friends while hunting for Anima in secret whenever he could. But this easy life was not going to last for long as the hidden power he sacrificed a long time ago began to awaken once more! [Initializing Superhuman System...] [Recognizing Host... Host Recognized.] [Parsing Constitution. Host Fully Healed. No Traces Of Residual Damage.] "Hello once again, Mark Vanitas. Has it already been four years?" ... Posting Schedule: Two chapters a day everyday, except days when extra chapters are posted along with the regular ones. ... Join the Discord: https://discord.gg/dqey8X95tG

Legioneer_1000 · Fantasy
4.5
853 Chs

Kill the Sun

Earth, thousands of years after the apocalypse. A boy with amnesia woke up in the middle of the Dregs, the worst part of Crimson Fungus City. The boy grows up and manages to become strong enough to pass an exam for one of the most prestigious jobs in existence, a Zephyx Extractor, someone that can harvest the powers of Specters. Zephyx Extractors have the power to travel kilometers in seconds, read minds, and destroy mountains. In this oppressive world, they are the only ones who can change their destiny. Sadly, the boy had already gained a power from a Specter in the past, which made him ineligible for the position. His dream was dead. Or was it? Join my Discord: https://discord.gg/EfePH46Aru If my patreon gets more than 1000€ per month, I will increase the word count of my chapters! Join my Patreon: patreon.com/user?u=27791050

Warmaisach · Fantasy
4.6
929 Chs

What Do You Mean There Are Other Transmigrators In My Harem Fantasy?

In the most cliched fashion, a giant truck-kun smashed into my World, killing everyone with it. And in the next most cliched event, I was given a second chance in life by the gods to live another life in a world of swords, magic and dragons! It’s literally a dream come true! Be a hero? Who has the time?! Conquer the world? Like hell I’ll do something so troublesome! Diving into dungeons, exploring ancient ruins and meeting all the weirdos of the world? Sign me right up!! I’m only interested in travelling the world to find the most interesting materials I can use to write the best story I can! I’ll show you my creativity and dazzle this new world with the stories I’ll write! I’ll fight with dragons, swim with krakens, wrestle giants, eat all the cakes and bed the beauties! Time to live this life however I want! Eh? A psycho is running around the world saying that they are the hero who will slay the demon lord? Why is there such a crazy person? There’s someone out there threatening the world with nukes? How did they even find out how to make those? Some crazy hobo is going into other people’s houses to smash pots to look for money? That guy really must be crazy. What Do You Mean There Are Other Transmigrators In My Harem Fantasy? ----- [Character Creation:] [Gender:] [Male] [Female] >[Futa] *** Notes: Any R-rated scenes will be denoted by a '*' followed by an 'R' with the number of 'R's showing how much of it is R-rated. '*R' would be around 25%, '*RR' would be about 50% and '*RRR' would most likely be the entire chapter. You can join our discord through this link: https://discord.gg/CRrb56c

Draekai · Fantasy
4.2
1020 Chs

The Epic Tale of Chaos vs Order

Thousands of years ago, humankind left the Old World. We enter a new age where science and magic are no longer opposing concepts. With these new opportunities came danger in the form of the Dark Races and the ones that named themselves Gods. However, if there was one thing humans were good at was their ability to destroy. Humankind fought and carved a bloody path into the new world. Cain's luck had never been good, but his destiny changed forever once he decided to harden his heart and face the world without fear or hesitation. --Godslayer Humankind's motto.-- We can comprehend the supernatural. We can dominate the supernatural. We can kill the supernatural - Adam, Emperor of Godslayer Humankind, The First Titan. Current schedule: 21 chapters a week. Bonus chapters: Over 600 power stones: 3 extra chapters. Over 800 power stones: 6 extra chapters. Over 1200 power stones: 9 extra chapters. Discord channel: https://discord.gg/R666sNEdrU

Redsunworld · Fantasy
4.5
1702 Chs
Login