Is this novel gonna be long, or just a short novel for the contest's sake? Also i agree, make the MC less dense. In ur other novel he is like the typical saiyan, all muscle, very little brain.
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LIKETypical saiyn would not be God of frienship, but cool and calculating like vegita in the start of DBZ, before he became puss.y. As for Mc in his other novel, yeah he's stupid retar.d. Not because he's dense as you say, but because he's not using his power effectively and his thinking is not that of powerhouse.
Toga:I could always expand it after the contest, but idk atm. I'll just write as it goes. But yeah, I'm pretty dense, and Kalan too bc I put myself in his shoes
Well good luck finding a chick. Being as dense as you are you might not even find one before your 50.
Toga:I could always expand it after the contest, but idk atm. I'll just write as it goes. But yeah, I'm pretty dense, and Kalan too bc I put myself in his shoes