Try to make the mc a more romantic man pleased. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . According to your last work he was sorta dense, let me rephrase it REALLY DENSE
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LIKEIt’s not I don’t like action but the author is infamous for writing about romance for 1/5 of the book then broke them up :(
TycKa:If you want romance, go to romance section and you will find alot of stories with harem and romance as you like. This is action, not romance.
. . . As wise man said it is the invalidity of the author that cripples the novel likewise a good author can bring out the potential of a romance in short go go go romance and keep up the good work it must be hard working on multiple books and keeping a weekly quota
Toga:this isn't a fanfic, it's an original novel