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Utopys
UtopysLv136yr
2019-03-19 22:24

I must say that I've been waiting 3 full weeks before this book obtained enouth votes, si I am happy now. I'll go to the main points now, first on the wrighting qualty, wile I've been reading books in english for three years now, I can't say I'm proficient in ortograph so my point of view may not be of interest to you but so far, I didn't see notable mistakes. Second as the book just started being translated we can't be sure about the stability of updates but I'll just say that the 18th chapter was updated 20 hours ago while the 17th was 10 hours ago, not saying it is bad, but it may be bad. For the story developpement, it's fine, I mean, in other books the mc is like "I'm hearing voices and seeing floating textes, fine I'll follow their orders" while the corect thing to think is "am I crazy? Like, in my brain?" But some weirds happening, the sister of the unicorn man find the mc's house but I don't remember the mc telling them where he lives. But overall, it's okay. For the character desing, well the mc is the classical "I don't talk much and I'm cold headed and I'm beautifull" but you now what, I don't hate what is classical! but he is a bit lucky, beeing choosen out of a full room of doctors and interns to help,while he was playing on is phone, I'm okay withe the fact that a girl will mostly go to a charming guy, but when it comes to work, you won't takes the risk to bring someone who is playing on his phone at work to help just because he is dashing, your putting yourself in danger of being fired. For the world backgroud I don't know, it seems futuristic with the transformers (I don't now about others countrys but in france transformers are a bunch of giant robots who can transform in vehicles) but my lack of medical knowledge stop me from judging anithing about the hospital. All in all, It's very good for now, and I'm waiting to see what's next! (I hope the 19th chapter will be out before the 20th)

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Utopys
UtopysLv13

Just came back from verifying, and transformer can be traduced by transformateur in french, my bad, not futiristic, but still can't judge the medical stuff

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(Copy and pasted from my NU review) This novel is extremely good with what it is. The plot is really bad, but it is a really good read. Update: Raws, 255 I originally thought that this novel was a decent read. Then it got repetitive. New cookie cutter girl swoons, ofc Ling ran ignores. Repeat. Nothing new. My breaking point is Yu Yuan. How do you get such a dumb character in the novel??? They try to interject awkwardly into situations and she is brain dead in her interactions. The breaking point of that breaking point is Ling Ran and his patriotism. There is no "China is number one" kind of oneupsmanship in medicine. We are all working to a common goal, regardless of nationality. It is extremely obvious, and it feels like colonialism 2.0, at least the way that the author describes it. Ling Ran sticks with the same hospital, even though HE KNOWS HE IS LIMITED BY THE NUMBER OF BEDS. So leave for gods sake. Mayo clinic, Shanghai foot, a lot of good places would accept him. Why does he want to be a 'world class doctor', when he stays in the chinese equivalent of the backwaters of Alabama? Tian Hao too. She is a 3rd gen rich girl who just wants to win over Ling Ran. Except she has negative brain cells. B_tch please. I am trying to enjoy the novel and all you can do is interject and add random bullcr*p. I don't care if you drive a Rolls Royce today, and a Bentley tomorrow. The only good part was Meng Leyao. Jeez, a woman who is more normal than the rest, who doesn't immediately get wet after seeing Ling Ran, except she disappears for 100 chapters. The ticket system encourages high word count, which comes at the expense of quality. Thank you for listening to my ted talk. /Rant

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