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MishalZamir
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2018-11-01 22:22

Excellent writing quality! damn that was good. You're one good author. The sentences are smooth with fine vocabulary. The character development has no issues so far and the story and background development is really great! waiting for more good luck! ^^ x -Meshal

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done please review mine ^^ x

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