Item: Good Girl Gone Bad: Queen of the Underworld
Rating: 4
Author: MishalZamir

MishalZamirLv46yr

2018-11-01 22:22

Excellent writing quality! damn that was good. You're one good author. The sentences are smooth with fine vocabulary. The character development has no issues so far and the story and background development is really great! waiting for more good luck! ^^ x -Meshal

Good Girl Gone Bad: Queen of the Underworld

BAJJ

4.5

387 Chs

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MishalZamirLv4

done please review mine ^^ x

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BAJJAuthor

Im currently reading yours.

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