Review Detail of DeJeL in Sweet Desire

*Remember, this review is based off the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: You had a few grammatical errors, but they were not that bad. Also, I noticed that you had not updated in the past month, and you also had another large gap w/o much if any explanation before hand... I suggest you try your best to rectify these issues. Positive Feedback: You did great on the plot and whatnot, strong story so far.;,;. Personal Feedback: I will continue reading this story and thank you for the time you have taken to write this story so far... I just hope you don't drop it. Score: WQ 4/5 SoU 3/5 Rest 5/5