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BoredAsura
BoredAsuraLv136yr
2018-10-19 11:52

Well first off my many issue with the story is the grammar. Feels like it went through a machine translation from korean to Japanese to english to German and back to english. I tried to push through it since it seemed like a good story in the first few chapters but then it feel through on another problem. There are several time skips and you would never know until q character mentions it but it feels like maybe at most a week went by, by the way the author is describing it. Qnd finally to the main character the author makes it seem like he disdains all young masters and those that force their will on others but then next chapter the mc will look down on everyone and say things like I guess that amount of disrespect is alright. Overall this has nearly killed me trying to read this and dont understand how this became a popular story

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Hidazure
HidazureAuthor

You know how WebNovel shows how far you reas on your reviews right? If pushing through means reading five chapters for you fine then. But the first chapters are the main issue. I understand that I failed them a bit, but as you can see many people got past them. If you read less than a quarter of a Webnovel and then review, the concept doesn't work. You are basically just judging kt by it's cover at this pojnt.

BoredAsura
BoredAsuraLv13

Push through is wrong way of saying how I felt. I prefer the term endured. I tried to endure your novel until it became of a certain level but couldn't. Qlso you criticize my judgment of it only because of low review but the other review which is literally just one chapter later than mine says it's great with 6 chapters you ignore it. It's called criticism. I pointed out the parte that I didn't like specifically. Not like I said it sucked and didn't give any reference to what I was talk about. I gave specifics I'm my review. But if you are so sensitive that you cant handle that then that's a fault of yours

Hidazure:You know how WebNovel shows how far you reas on your reviews right? If pushing through means reading five chapters for you fine then. But the first chapters are the main issue. I understand that I failed them a bit, but as you can see many people got past them. If you read less than a quarter of a Webnovel and then review, the concept doesn't work. You are basically just judging kt by it's cover at this pojnt.
Hidazure
HidazureAuthor

He wrote his review at the time there were only six chapters. He did rate everything. I won't ask for you to take it down, neither will I delete it. Just consider reading further please.

BoredAsura:Push through is wrong way of saying how I felt. I prefer the term endured. I tried to endure your novel until it became of a certain level but couldn't. Qlso you criticize my judgment of it only because of low review but the other review which is literally just one chapter later than mine says it's great with 6 chapters you ignore it. It's called criticism. I pointed out the parte that I didn't like specifically. Not like I said it sucked and didn't give any reference to what I was talk about. I gave specifics I'm my review. But if you are so sensitive that you cant handle that then that's a fault of yours
NightHunter
NightHunterLv14

When you realize. That i disrupted the reply chain. EXTREME MADLAD

Hidazure
HidazureAuthor

Damn! I wouldn't keep this up anyway. Keep the madness up, demolish your enemies!

NightHunter:When you realize. That i disrupted the reply chain. EXTREME MADLAD
Wabafet
WabafetLv6

Hahaha

NightHunter:When you realize. That i disrupted the reply chain. EXTREME MADLAD
Samuelzx
SamuelzxLv2

We are

Samuelzx
SamuelzxLv2

You are

Samuelzx
SamuelzxLv2

I have been working on it

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