Review Detail of FujiCigarette in An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods
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Writing Quality 3/5 - writing is not perfect but the message is there and you can understand the story flow enough to enjoy the story.. Stability of Updates 4/5 - pretty good update rate...its 16 now but when i found it a few days back it only had like 9 so pretty fast Story Development 3/5 - pretty good premise and direction, rated only a 3 are there are some points where other readers point out that feels a bit.. well not forced but strange Character Design 3/5 - its a fanfic where author needs to portray characters of a different author in the right way so 3 is a good number World Background 4/5 - it is essentially the TDG world with various elements from other fictions i can take inconsistency with the plot or character behavior.... one thing i cant take is inconsistency in mechanic and forcing something to happen but when you look at it... it doesnt really work...changed my review, it still the same just changed some of the unreasonable things i wrote lol....
An Immortal's Tales Of Demons And Gods
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hmmm read it again till chapter 84 and id say you improved on writing adding 1star in writing quality stability of updates now at 5 because wow 87 chapters... fast... story development now at 3.5, added half a star because the story improved but still wont go above 4 for me because of my preferences character design is still at a 3 because it is fanfiction and primarily because the personality of the mc is fixed and not some kind of character that experiences drastic changes as the story goes on, while yes he does change a little bit but his past life still dictates most of his reasoning world background is still a 4
ElionAVL:Opinion right now?
FujiCigarette:hmmm read it again till chapter 84 and id say you improved on writing adding 1star in writing quality stability of updates now at 5 because wow 87 chapters... fast... story development now at 3.5, added half a star because the story improved but still wont go above 4 for me because of my preferences character design is still at a 3 because it is fanfiction and primarily because the personality of the mc is fixed and not some kind of character that experiences drastic changes as the story goes on, while yes he does change a little bit but his past life still dictates most of his reasoning world background is still a 4
let me tell you an advice... take a rest, good lord how fast your churning out chapters.... its so fast, its worrying, give me what your taking, i sure need me some of those
ElionAVL:Glad to know I improved :)
FujiCigarette:let me tell you an advice... take a rest, good lord how fast your churning out chapters.... its so fast, its worrying, give me what your taking, i sure need me some of those
Thank You For Making This Review .I am Currently Inspiring From Reviews Of More Popular Books To See What a Good Story Should be Like.For Example ,Just Like You Said Here, Making Unreasonable Things Happen Like Winning The Lottery 4 times.Again,I Appreciate That You Did This Review and Helped Me Out a Little.