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Ikasuki
IkasukiLv56yr
2018-10-23 02:17

Overlord novel is a piece of art. every chapter are thousands of words long explaining how a world fonction, how every and any people living in it works and feel, and how the MC (Ainz Ooal Gown Alias Momonga) is thronwn in it knowing nothing about it and working his way trhough 1 understanding this new world and his place in it, 2 keeping a facade for his guild/NPC, 3 trying to contact hos old allies if they exist, 4 having a bit of fun on the way. This "fan" noval miss the point by a hundred thousands light years. We got the generic "oh I ded, now 5 wish1 I overpower !!! Prayz me moaar END OF CHAPTER ONE" CHapter could be called paragraph. And the grammar is... Well. I'm not english but gosh darn that's some bad grammar. Advice, pass your way, or go read the real Overlord Light nove, hell even the manga are far greater.

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animadrop
animadropLv5

This fanfic is basically two thoughts packed into extremely bad grammar with unconnected sentences and no style at all. 1. I want an Overlord fanfic where the MC is OP and arrives before Overlord's MC. 2. I want an anime system with which I spawn endless characters from mainstream anime in this world making it a crossover. There is nothing a good story needs that you can find here. The MC is basically allpowerful but the author doesn't have the slightest idea on how to write anything with that. There isn't any worldbuilding, no characterization (less than 2D characters), no plot, no good grammar, no chapter length, no story. Literally bullshìt that nearly anyone can write in a quarter of an hour stretched into ten chapters.

6yr

Siterus
SiterusLv4

I don't know what people like about this fan-fic. The chapters are short,like really short, the mc is a dumbass, and don't even get me started on the grammar... If you want to lose a few brain cells I say go ahead and read it.

6yr
falopa
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6yr
DeprivedUser
DeprivedUserAuthor

Shameless Author giving 5 star Give me power stone so I can make sure your reading this Novel! Power Stone plsssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

6yr
ROnin2k02
ROnin2k02Lv5

Well it's the beginning The start is one very used on this site The MC jumped to the girls from the start(hope for some ecchi stuff) The story just started but i hope for some MC development I hope he will take a "destroy the MC of that Universe and steal the girl" path and not just gonna summon every girl i like For 2 chapters the story put anticipation in me Good luck and hope it gonna be a good fiction

6yr
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Below_Average
Below_AverageLv5

i love the story and really wish i could rate it higher but i cant the grammar is poor but unless your a nit picky ***** you shouldn't mind since he/she gets their point across easy enough and he somehow handles the OPness in a messy yet manageable manner

6yr
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