Ikasuki

Sasugai is going to be a hole new beast…

Although I understand your comment I feel it’s a bit unfair. To be honest yes the story has many small problems here and there but as it is an insert and the author repeatedly says he is 17 we have to acknowledge several point, one he lacks experience and writting skills probably, yet despite that he is able to capture much of the place and tone accurately though sometime a bit too cliche ( the fact that he didn’t read the books but only the show doesn’t help either) could this fic be better written yes most likely. Is it still good also yes. So let’s enjoy what we have and watch as the author grows both as a person and a writer. ( could have never written so well or so much at 17 so I will cast no stone)

I feel like he missed the best powers entirely… passive adaptation would make him grow stronger smarter more resistant and to everything perhaps even including warp influence… combined with the dex perk that would make him way stronger. A card to remove a weakness on a tool is less appealing in comparaison not only doesn’t he improve himself or his body which is his best tools, but any other thing he can use it on can potentially be lost or removed. AND somehow he can’t use the card on his psyker power to remove its weakness to corruption. So it’s a net deficit not a gain

I think you are missing the point, for exemple dismissing thing as « just being tired » never feels like good writing because 1 if it were just being tired there would be no need to write about something appearing in the edge of his visionnant disappearing, 2 especially when it is a reappearing pattern and the mc dismiss it, it feels cheap and make the Mc looks stupid, what do you think would be any people reactiôn knowing of 40k being isekaied there when some weird stuff start to happen and there was cultist present before? The very 1 thought would be shit… warp fuckery! Second would be shit even more warp fuckery and the distant 3rd maybe this is some elder shit… but no most likely warp fuckery. The thinking of the character doesn’t reflect that. Also he doesn’t seems to have a clearly defined goal, escaping a world on the verge of exterminatus for one would seems smart. There is only so much a las pistol and muscle can do against planet scale warp fuckery. Him getting better and having a system is one thing. But he seems to be wobbling in the dark without any idea of what to do or to strive for. This doesn’t make for compelling story telling.

Why would a laser weapon have kick back? This makes no sense. It’s not a bolt gun or doesn’t work through explosion.

And uninteresting... fight with danzo was too log and useless seing the random 157+ konoah ninja team is just not interesting. Who gives à fuck about random chunin B on team 874. Give me the MC and the plot and the interesting bit

Sûre but it is a good way to disguise himself and heal beyond what positive energy can do

Of course he is still alive and they discuss for a 5 godamn legal work day while he could be spewing bullshit for all they know and they readily believe him because of course it makes « perfect sense »

Well let me amend my comment I was wrong it’s pretty good actually. Wouldn’t have guessed it from the premise but the author actually deliver quality content

Where does this limitation nerf come out of nowhere after 32 chapter?