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Watergirl1213
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2018-11-11 15:40

I like the way story is been playing in all. The story depicts many different emotions Nd they put in right places. I have been addicted to it since a started reading it. I'm always curious what would happen next.

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caremel
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Thank you very much for the review. I'm really happy that you like the story and I hope the story keeps you entertained as it continues on. I promise that everything will become more and more exciting as it goes on.

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I love ur book

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I love ur book

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I love ur book

Watergirl1213
Watergirl1213Lv5

I really love this story.... Nd just get well soon and release more chapters!!😂

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caremel
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IF YOU NEED MORE INFO, READ THIS! First, let me say thank you for checking my story out, I created this review (and shamelessly gave myself 5.0 stars) to give you guys information about the frequency of updates, about the story and other random bits of information that might be useful. Now, let's begin... - The story is a long romance. At this point in time, I don't know how long but I assure that it'll be more than 100 chapters. - I'll upload daily (unless there are problems with inkstone) - The chapter upload times will be infrequent because I got to school but on weeks where I have broken (like winter break and after April) the chapters will be uploaded at 12 - 2 pm Eastern Time. - On the 1st of every month, there will be a mass release of around 3-5 chapters, depending on how many extras I wrote in the month. - This story will not contain NTR between the main couple, in fact, there will be no cheating. - The story's romance slow in the beginning, so it takes a small bit for the two characters to fully meet and exchange greetings(no more than 20 chapters in) but it picks up after that. - Schemes and misunderstandings will be present, like in many romance stories, but the story is revelation based, meaning there is a "mystery" that will be presented and the romance and story developments build on it. - The story focuses on my main characters, their "friends" and their families. It's like a soap opera. - This story comes from my own head, it isn't based off any real people I know. If the characters are similar to people you know it's 100% just a coincidence. Alright, that's all for now. If anyone has any questions, feel free to ask below. I'll be glad to answer any question, except if it has anything to do with spoiling the story. Thanks again for reading, I hope you continue to follow the story, Till next time.

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