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2018-11-11 08:01

The story is evolving so it's hard to say where it will end. If you love Full Marks Hidden Marriage, you will enjoy this. The characters are a lot more human. They have flaws and weaknesses, but this makes them more accessible than FMHM where everyone is at the zenith of their respective talents. A bit of struggle and growth makes this the better story. The ML and FL both have major things that they stand to lose, and watching as they feel their way towards a solution is good reading. Even the would-be villlians are not introduced as bad guys, so trying to figure out past motives and future designs makes for a lively and entertaining read. This needs a bit of snu snu- not for us pervs, but because we need to read about these characters bring cherished and getting a hug, because no one loves, cherishes, or hugs the leads. I think Webnovel needs a new way in which to flag up well structured stories because if I had been a tad busier I might not have scrolled down far enough to find this gem. Perhaps they could feature the most comprehensive reviews of new works to lead others through the flotsam and jetsam. Please, oh please, please please finish the story because this is well crafted without any of the negative, abusive tropes. Thanks for all of the chapters!

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caremel
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Thank you so much for reading and I’m really happy you enjoy the story. While crafting the characters I wanted them to feel more human and struggle but the end goal is always their happiness in mind. Just wait a little and there will be some snu snu soon. I promise! As for finishing the story I promise I’ll finish it. There is no way I’m going to stop in the end. I really love these characters and want to show give them a proper story with a proper ending. Again, thank you for reading and supporting the story. I hope I’m able to meet your expectations in the future. 🥰

glofien
glofienLv5

i agree... the story is more realistic than FMHM

sf1234
sf1234Lv10

👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Anushka_Meerah
Anushka_MeerahLv11

I agree.i love these charactees and they are so well developed.

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caremel
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IF YOU NEED MORE INFO, READ THIS! First, let me say thank you for checking my story out, I created this review (and shamelessly gave myself 5.0 stars) to give you guys information about the frequency of updates, about the story and other random bits of information that might be useful. Now, let's begin... - The story is a long romance. At this point in time, I don't know how long but I assure that it'll be more than 100 chapters. - I'll upload daily (unless there are problems with inkstone) - The chapter upload times will be infrequent because I got to school but on weeks where I have broken (like winter break and after April) the chapters will be uploaded at 12 - 2 pm Eastern Time. - On the 1st of every month, there will be a mass release of around 3-5 chapters, depending on how many extras I wrote in the month. - This story will not contain NTR between the main couple, in fact, there will be no cheating. - The story's romance slow in the beginning, so it takes a small bit for the two characters to fully meet and exchange greetings(no more than 20 chapters in) but it picks up after that. - Schemes and misunderstandings will be present, like in many romance stories, but the story is revelation based, meaning there is a "mystery" that will be presented and the romance and story developments build on it. - The story focuses on my main characters, their "friends" and their families. It's like a soap opera. - This story comes from my own head, it isn't based off any real people I know. If the characters are similar to people you know it's 100% just a coincidence. Alright, that's all for now. If anyone has any questions, feel free to ask below. I'll be glad to answer any question, except if it has anything to do with spoiling the story. Thanks again for reading, I hope you continue to follow the story, Till next time.

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