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ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv55yr
2019-01-29 08:39

hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it? hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?hey author this novel is really good could please continue writing it?

Mother Of All Systems!!

Crixzivion
4.2
46 Chs

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Crixzivion
CrixzivionAuthor

Hehe hello guys first time Author here hope you like my first book😊😊.......................... F*ck this 140 characters limit...........................................

6yr

Ashley_Russ
Ashley_RussLv2

More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More

5yr
anang
anangLv14

hey author i really have something to tell you I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

5yr
YumGod
YumGodLv10

will give this rating as it just the first chapter but wil increase if next chapter is good and i wanted to ask u how many chapter u can release per day or in one week time. For the first chapter i quite like it as the mc drop into a hole instead of getting hit by a truck but it kinda weird as a hole will appeared out of nowhere well i guess it his unlucky ability .Hope u can make more and i am intrested in the next chapter on wat system he will choose and is intrigue as he can choose more system as he is getting stronger so it means he is not very op like saitama in the start but will slowly getting stronger .Hope u can release more daily :3 i support u GAMBATEH

6yr
InfernalRhage
InfernalRhageLv4

Honestly I am not impressed with this novel for a number of reasons the main one being the the writing quality. The number of times the author starts a sentence without capitalizing is enough to drive anyone crazy. Then when you add in the misuse of pronouns such as his her he and she it becomes a mess. The author also needs to keep track of his math better stating he was awarded 5000sp for a quest and only showing 1000 on the stats page without any store purchases then jumping from 1000 to 8000 with no notice that he gained anything. Another example is where the system suggests he purchase an upgrade for 150sp for him to state he doesn't have enough and to notify him when he did. In that same chapter it shows him having 8000sp which is more than enough to cover a 150sp purchase. I highly suggest the author find an editor for this novel to help him fix said errors before continuing.

6yr
not_of_use
not_of_useLv4

It's mind blowing the story is superb and like the way it's going. Eating for it's next update, been a lot time but coming soon😎😎. Wanna known when the mc will get his next system and also gets transmitted to next world I wish he will😜😜

4yr
Daoist179253
Daoist179253Lv3

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE !

4yr
Kuntang
KuntangLv4

Author san good work. Don't lose hope on urself that u can't write good novel, it's one of the best I have read so far. We will be waiting for ur new release soon. Keep up the good work author San.

5yr
Requiem_Soul
Requiem_SoulLv10

This **** goes down when he *died*. Sigh. And with all those none existence interaction between character. Dissapointed as fuxk................................. .....

5yr
zZCandyZz
zZCandyZzLv13

Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................

5yr
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