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XumitLv135yr
2019-11-14 02:06

This novel is so cringy. Twin brother and sister are arrives in one piece world. The male wants all the girl as harem and the girl wants all the guy as harem. It wouldn't be so cringy if there was only harem for the male. Both of them are connected by a twin fruit even at spiritual level. It's cringy to think both will get excited when one of the twin is having sex. So, rather than enforcing your non-existent morals, better write incest or just kill the female lead. I'll rather read incest rather than this messed up ****.

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Seikatsu
SeikatsuLv5

That's exactly why I could never bring myself to continue this. Author originally teased incest but then started forcing some bs where the girl was trying to build a harem. That is a huge turn off for me if I wasn't intentionally reading something with that plot. I love one piece fanfics but this really killed it

Madara_Otsutsuki_
Madara_Otsutsuki_Lv4

thx man! i dodge the bullet 😭👍

TheUltimateP1e
TheUltimateP1eLv4

good i didnt even read

SOMMO_ARCANO
SOMMO_ARCANOLv2

Thx friend

Lucas_Croft
Lucas_CroftLv2

why are you implying that only males can have harem? I am male and even I think that this is sexist, I dont like harem to begin with but why can only a man have a harem?

GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

Bruh

Lucas_Croft:why are you implying that only males can have harem? I am male and even I think that this is sexist, I dont like harem to begin with but why can only a man have a harem?
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