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Eslyna
EslynaLv45yr
2019-07-17 11:58

Love the fruit idea you did, but the MCs are too OP already basically, plus everything seems too forced. The system also totally disapeared once they trained for all those years, plus reactions were bit 2D. My biggest problem though are that almost 90% of what I read has ... after every sentence, and when it finally stopped, it picked up again! Still one of the better Fan Fics out there

One Piece System In One Piece

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4.0
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Idek but everyone in this review section has me wanting to mcShootmyselfinthe head 😐 y’all fucked up bastards. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140

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