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Clara_the_fishLv106yr
2019-01-28 05:57

This is probably my least favorite novel on Webnovel. It's sooo shallow. I know there are tons of cliche "betrayal, white lotus little sister with ex-fiance, new love with powerful hot man" but this one is the worst out of all of them. The FL spends almost all her time wallowing in despair and heartache and doesn't do sh*t about her problems. There's also lots of nonsense about her "cold eyes that have hints of so and so emotion." If they have emotion, they aren't cold! The dialogues often feel copy-pasted, especially the ones between FL and her sister. At least put some effort into the dialogue, if nothing else... next, there's too much drama, too few explanations. We're thrown right into the story (which is fine, lots of novels are like that) but we don't get any substantial explanation/backstory even after 15 chapters. That is NOT fine. If we are to enjoy the story, we should get the backstory. Of course, the backstory is probably some abominably cliche sh*t like "I was in love with my ex-fiance when he suddenly got stolen away by my sister, etc etc" but it would be nice to know the details, right? Right? Also, I read through the first 15 chapters and all of it had some kind of crazy dramatic dialogue, lots of crying, etc. Evidently, the author(s) is fond of mindless drama. Kind of like people who think that the amount of kisses in a relationship determines the amount of love their partners have for them. I regret voting for this novel. Even the plot synopsis is terribly unoriginal and boring. If this review gets taken down, that just shows that whoever wanted it taken down is as shallow as this novel. Such bad taste!

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AndrewSirrLv4

Same feelings here bro/sis. I just feel like I have wasted my precious time on a piece of junk. It should have been better if I read some children books...😠😠😠

Clara_the_fishLv10

I'm a sis, lol. And IKR?!?!? I feel like I got increasingly stupid as I read this thing. My poor brain cells...

AndrewSirr:Same feelings here bro/sis. I just feel like I have wasted my precious time on a piece of junk. It should have been better if I read some children books...😠😠😠
MorvianLv6

I feel same! this novel has depressing air around it! It's make me feel depressed 😅😅

lilpriestessLv14

So glad I read the reviews as I was looking for something to pass the time while waiting for my fav novels to update. I can’t stand ubbbber drama. And if there is ubbbber drama then the writing better tight and well written and hilarious. I’ve dropped a ton on here that started off well and then too much drama killed it.

Clara_the_fishLv10

I took a look at the new female novels in the queue (the ones we vote power stones for) and all of them look extremely trashy, especially to a feminist like me.

lilpriestess:So glad I read the reviews as I was looking for something to pass the time while waiting for my fav novels to update. I can’t stand ubbbber drama. And if there is ubbbber drama then the writing better tight and well written and hilarious. I’ve dropped a ton on here that started off well and then too much drama killed it.
ReadertoppriorityLv6

I feel like this book is so very similar to another book with a different title. Whe. I skimmed the chapters I thought I was reading another story just a different name for the protagonists

SonYeJinLv14

you went OFF my guy/girl. but ima take your word for it. thanks for saving me some time.

Met2Lv6

Just read Hidden Marriage. Maybe this novel can satisfy you..

Clara_the_fishLv10

Thanks, but I’ve already read HM

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Met2Lv6

Lol... And this other novel. Do yoy read it also. Its funny too

Clara_the_fish:Thanks, but I’ve already read HM
Clara_the_fishLv10

? what other novel?

Met2:Lol... And this other novel. Do yoy read it also. Its funny too
oceanwave00Lv5

Someone suggest a good novel to me please...

Clara_the_fishLv10

I’m Really A Superstar, Hidden Marriage, Adorable Food Goddess

oceanwave00:Someone suggest a good novel to me please...
oceanwave00Lv5

Oh! thank you so much. I just finished hidden marriage 🙁 , and i can't sleep without reading , I'll search for it straight away.

Clara_the_fish:I’m Really A Superstar, Hidden Marriage, Adorable Food Goddess
oceanwave00Lv5

That's my favorite too

Met2:Just read Hidden Marriage. Maybe this novel can satisfy you..
AmjayLv3

I like to read a the novel here

AmRyLv5

Nah, all of the novels in romance section has similar plots like heart breaking, abuse of their family to look like damn damsel in distress, back stabbing, agawan ng shota etc... But it up to the author creadibility to make some twist and an opinion coming from a reader like me who puts half of his life in reading this is all I can say " If this story can not satisfy you then find another one, no one forced you to read they want you to read to conclude it is all up onto you."

phyrdausLv10

Thank God i wont go 4 it Thanks

ChristySeraSwiftccLv11

After reading the description I was already sure that this is a typical cliche and the marriage part reminded me of trial marriage smh and facepalms... I loved reading your detailed review though. It's a good one.

keymonSTERLv13

So glad I read this review, the theme is overly used and if it has no substance to differentiate from the other stories than there is no use in reading it

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