Review Detail of Director in Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
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Endless Girls : Infinite Harem :( Writing Quality = Amazing Update Speed = Like a Speed demon But unfortunately, even though author makes such well-written characters. Why does he have to add almost every girl into the MC's harem? I don't mind harem, but if girls just for some reason just keeps falling inlove to our MC and other men are almost nonexistent, the story feels dull. Especially as if the story, the MC's character is driven accordingly to his harem. I don't even care if his harem gets left out if he travels other worlds, infact I'd be rather welcoming of that idea. I really like this novel in the beginning, it was very fun. We see our MC grow up, shape up for every encounter. Our MC desires *******; to have fun, but he seems binded again albeit not to chains but to his harem.
Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
Einlion
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Well, that does motivate me to catch up to the latest chapters, and it does amaze me how you replied on this review so fast!
Einlion:Though the Harem doesn't go away, things do get progressively better as the story continues~! I hope you're able to catch up to the current chapters in the future o3o!
I had just finished another chapter recently and thought I'd check to see if there was anything new :P
Director:Well, that does motivate me to catch up to the latest chapters, and it does amaze me how you replied on this review so fast!
Director:Also I'd like to add, although the harem is overdone, aside from that, such as character interaction/development(how it shapes up our MC is probably one of the best I've seen, for a fanfiction atleast), world building has potential if we set aside the focus on the harem, Grammar is also well done.
Einlion:Though the Harem doesn't go away, things do get progressively better as the story continues~! I hope you're able to catch up to the current chapters in the future o3o!
I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted. It is fine when it is a few girls but it is EVERY single girl in the story that is HOT for him. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.
If the 'review' is literally a complaint, why shouldn't it be deleted? Complaining does nothing to inform new readers, nor does it help guide the direction of the story at all. It is literally just treating the review section as a blog board.
SorcererCat:I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted. It is fine when it is a few girls but it is EVERY single girl in the story that is HOT for him. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.
Einlion:If the 'review' is literally a complaint, why shouldn't it be deleted? Complaining does nothing to inform new readers, nor does it help guide the direction of the story at all. It is literally just treating the review section as a blog board.
There is a metric provided for a reason, none of which includes the fragile sensibilities of people that have nothing better to do than feed negativity into the world.
SorcererCat:I'm sorry you feel that way, but you don't seem to understand what reviews are about.
You should stop letting your anger control you. Like I stated for some reason you don't seem to understand what reviews are and what their uses are for. Just stop getting so angry over these reviews so easily. You need to stop thinking reviews are only there to tell you how fantastic you are. That is not the main reason for reviews. Reviews are their for people to post or state their opinions on the LN or content that they read. And for others to read them and try to come to an understanding of what the LN may be about or may not be about. Authors can look at these reviews and see where people seem to have issues or dislikes in their story telling and ether change it or not. Many authors are grateful for this information.
Einlion:There is a metric provided for a reason, none of which includes the fragile sensibilities of people that have nothing better to do than feed negativity into the world.
See, you go out of your way to make unsubstantiated claims as, instead of angry, I'm more disheartened by the fact that people have the entire internet at their fingertips, an entire planet to explore, thousands of career opportunities, and hundreds of interesting people to meet yet, ignoring all that, they find more 'meaning' in being an asshole on the internet than doing a single productive thing with their time. Tell me, what are you even hoping to accomplish by throwing around false labels? If I say, "You should stop letting your pedophilic urges control you", does that automatically make you a pedophile? It is a completely unsubstantiated claim that is formulated entirely just to continue an argument that, by all rights, never should have been a thing. Everyone doesn't like something or the other but, we learn as kids that it is better to say something nice rather than say anything at all. If you don't like veggies, you still eat them because you know it is good for you, just like you work with co-workers you may hate. Acting childish and throwing a tantrum just because you don't like something does not elevate you onto a platform that entitles you to continue whining about it incessantly for days on end. Do something more productive with your life instead of trying to argue with someone you'll likely never meet, in a book you may very well have dropped, on a website with tens of thousands of alternatives. Seriously, grow the **** up. And as for your completely asinine remark, almost entirely founded in nothing more than your own mind, I don't treat the review section as a place where you should tell the author how much you enjoy their novel. I encourage constructive criticism, as the whole purpose of this novel is to improve my overall writing quality. I do not, however, condone pissants who think they can say destructive things without offering even a single fucking micron of positivity and yet expect to be taken seriously. If I showed up in a prison and told someone that has been there for years that they shouldn't have committed a crime, they would look at me like I'm a fucking retard. What, am I expected to change the entire story because some special snowflake got upset around the 200 chapters mark? No, that is completely retarded, almost to a monstrous extent. If you're only rehashing what someone else said, providing no beneficial information, you are simply a troll that wants to be heard. If you can't understand this VERY SIMPLE concept, then you haven't been worth the effort with which these words were written. Lastly, the review section is not a place to make your opinion known, as it is called the REVIEW section, not the opinion board. This is not a blog, no matter how much Tumblr has shaped your mind to think you're entitled to say whatever you want, whenever you want, without having to take responsibility. And yes, a lot of what I said was entirely unsubstantiated, but you're the one that decided to put yourself on a platform to get **** all over. I was happily writing a story for people that have found it interesting while, instead of doing ANYTHING ELSE, you decided to waste both of our time in MY review section. If you walk into someone's house and begin making a mess, you don't blame them for getting mad at you, you accept fucking responsibility like an ***** and either take a step back or move the **** on. These actions of your's are completely senseless and serve no possible benefit for anyone involved, especially yourself. Throw around as many platitudes as you want but, until you are fucking informed, you're nothing more than a patsy and a twat.
SorcererCat:You should stop letting your anger control you. Like I stated for some reason you don't seem to understand what reviews are and what their uses are for. Just stop getting so angry over these reviews so easily. You need to stop thinking reviews are only there to tell you how fantastic you are. That is not the main reason for reviews. Reviews are their for people to post or state their opinions on the LN or content that they read. And for others to read them and try to come to an understanding of what the LN may be about or may not be about. Authors can look at these reviews and see where people seem to have issues or dislikes in their story telling and ether change it or not. Many authors are grateful for this information.
There is something wrong with the way you see and understand things. I'm tired of trying to explain something as simple as "what a review really is and what it's purpose is for". All you are doing is getting angry over facts. I have tried to nicely explain these things to you to try and help you understand them better. Instead you get angry and keep arguing. There is no longer a reason for me to type to you. You have already declared that I'm nothing more than a troll with no life. I tried to help you understand and you refuse to understand. You can lead a horse to water but you can't make it drink. This is the situation that has occurred.
Einlion:See, you go out of your way to make unsubstantiated claims as, instead of angry, I'm more disheartened by the fact that people have the entire internet at their fingertips, an entire planet to explore, thousands of career opportunities, and hundreds of interesting people to meet yet, ignoring all that, they find more 'meaning' in being an asshole on the internet than doing a single productive thing with their time. Tell me, what are you even hoping to accomplish by throwing around false labels? If I say, "You should stop letting your pedophilic urges control you", does that automatically make you a pedophile? It is a completely unsubstantiated claim that is formulated entirely just to continue an argument that, by all rights, never should have been a thing. Everyone doesn't like something or the other but, we learn as kids that it is better to say something nice rather than say anything at all. If you don't like veggies, you still eat them because you know it is good for you, just like you work with co-workers you may hate. Acting childish and throwing a tantrum just because you don't like something does not elevate you onto a platform that entitles you to continue whining about it incessantly for days on end. Do something more productive with your life instead of trying to argue with someone you'll likely never meet, in a book you may very well have dropped, on a website with tens of thousands of alternatives. Seriously, grow the **** up. And as for your completely asinine remark, almost entirely founded in nothing more than your own mind, I don't treat the review section as a place where you should tell the author how much you enjoy their novel. I encourage constructive criticism, as the whole purpose of this novel is to improve my overall writing quality. I do not, however, condone pissants who think they can say destructive things without offering even a single fucking micron of positivity and yet expect to be taken seriously. If I showed up in a prison and told someone that has been there for years that they shouldn't have committed a crime, they would look at me like I'm a fucking retard. What, am I expected to change the entire story because some special snowflake got upset around the 200 chapters mark? No, that is completely retarded, almost to a monstrous extent. If you're only rehashing what someone else said, providing no beneficial information, you are simply a troll that wants to be heard. If you can't understand this VERY SIMPLE concept, then you haven't been worth the effort with which these words were written. Lastly, the review section is not a place to make your opinion known, as it is called the REVIEW section, not the opinion board. This is not a blog, no matter how much Tumblr has shaped your mind to think you're entitled to say whatever you want, whenever you want, without having to take responsibility. And yes, a lot of what I said was entirely unsubstantiated, but you're the one that decided to put yourself on a platform to get **** all over. I was happily writing a story for people that have found it interesting while, instead of doing ANYTHING ELSE, you decided to waste both of our time in MY review section. If you walk into someone's house and begin making a mess, you don't blame them for getting mad at you, you accept fucking responsibility like an ***** and either take a step back or move the **** on. These actions of your's are completely senseless and serve no possible benefit for anyone involved, especially yourself. Throw around as many platitudes as you want but, until you are fucking informed, you're nothing more than a patsy and a twat.
Just because someone isn't in line with your biased views, it doesn't mean there is something wrong with their thought process. Almost everything I said was determined by how you acted, not something I arbitrarily threw out of nowhere. Take responsibility for your own words and actions instead of trying to shift the blame onto the person you antagonized. That is part of growing the **** up.
SorcererCat:There is something wrong with the way you see and understand things. I'm tired of trying to explain something as simple as "what a review really is and what it's purpose is for". All you are doing is getting angry over facts. I have tried to nicely explain these things to you to try and help you understand them better. Instead you get angry and keep arguing. There is no longer a reason for me to type to you. You have already declared that I'm nothing more than a troll with no life. I tried to help you understand and you refuse to understand. You can lead a horse to water but you can't make it drink. This is the situation that has occurred.
Einlion:Just because someone isn't in line with your biased views, it doesn't mean there is something wrong with their thought process. Almost everything I said was determined by how you acted, not something I arbitrarily threw out of nowhere. Take responsibility for your own words and actions instead of trying to shift the blame onto the person you antagonized. That is part of growing the **** up.
Yeah, just continue ignoring your own part in things and move on, as you should have from the outset xD. Have a good day.
SorcererCat:Ignored. I'm done with your foolishness.
Not against your novel even if I find it mentally overwhelming to log all of the names of the harem, my fault not yours it's just hard to remember who certain characters are at times but I always get it eventually in the end, if you want only real comments on the review section why don't you delete all of the reviews that don't have anything to say? Like the many 5 star reviews that are just This novel is good! ................... (Spamming to make up word count) Where is the information in that? I acknowledge that the previous commenter was an angsty fallacy filled weak argumented person but his logic isn't completely faulty. If you only want real reviews then delete everything that isn't real!
Einlion:Yeah, just continue ignoring your own part in things and move on, as you should have from the outset xD. Have a good day.