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Purple_Bear
Purple_BearLv44yrPurple_Bear

The starting is a train wreck, but the writing shows substantial improvement after that. It's just that this seems more like one of those "slow-life" or "slice of life stories" that a regular adventure one, which is not my cup of tea. It's a pretty good book in that category if you happen to like those.

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The Achievement Junkie

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TheSilverQuillAuthorTheSilverQuill

Thanks for the honest feedback, it helps a lot! I know the action picks up a lot from here if you're interested.

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TheSilverQuillAuthorTheSilverQuill

Hey, just letting you know that my sequel is out now, "Outclassing the Achievement Junkie," in case you want to see my new take on the premise. With a new MC and world(s), and a lot more writing experience, I hope to do it even better the second time around :)