I will be biased and stated first that this is a hidden gem. I really enjoy reading this story and it keeps getting me more excited as to what's about to come with all of the foreshadowing. So far, I have really high hope for this story. --------------------- Now for the unbiased review. (I mean, I will try to be as unbiased as possible) The story is about a guy who won himself a ticket to another world by completing the achievements inside the game. The world he's summoned to is the same game world, but in the far far future. At the first few chapters, MC is a jerk, literally. So, he might be a bit unlikeable to some people, but that's where character development is for. As of chapter 39, he's a bit more likeable. Not much, but the development is there albeit slow. I would suggest you read until the end of volumn 1 to start judging this novel. Writing quality is quite good and near the top, there's still error here and there, but overall, it won't affect your reading. So, you can expect the sentences to flow smoothly and enjoy your read. Stability of Updates. Well, If I'm able to, I would even give this story a 7 star for the stability of updates. Enuf said. Story Development. If I'm to be biased, I will probably give this one a 5 star as well, but I couldn't. Even though I love all of it, I sure know that someone might not. As of chapters 39, there's no major action yet. If you love action pack novel then you might feel bore real fast, but the action is not really the main focus and charm of this novel. It's the interactions between characters and foreshadowing that keep me hooking for more. The author did a great job with it and there's a lot to hope for in the future story development. If you aren't concern with the lack of action in the earlier chapters then I think you will definitely love this novel. Another thing, with how the story progress, you could also expect a face slapping, but it's not too much or too low so even if you hate this category, I don't think it will affect your read that much because there's a lot more interest thing to read in this novel. There's also some cliches, but it's not much either. Character Design is great. Characters so far have a solid background. Some even a bit darker than they appeared to be, but that's what add depth to their character. Most characters introduced so far are unique and quite likeable. There's a lot to explore about the world background. There's not a lot to say about this really because so far, the world background is solid and make you want to learn more about it. With the MC's background being knowleadgeable about the world because it's inside a game he used to play, there's still many mystery and a lot that he himself doesn't know. Overall, it's a great read and you should give this novel a try. --------------------- I couldn't speak for everyone and this is honesty my personal opinion about this novel. It's pretty fun, enjoyable ride and I really hope for more. I hope you all enjoy this novel as much as me!
TheSilverQuill
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LIKEPersonally, I don't really mind the lack of action. The pace is perfect for me. But well, I believe many people will probably expect a lot of action in this kind of novel, that's why I give that one a 4 star even though I wanted to give it 5. And yes, I could expect a lot of the action after reading the direction of the 2nd volumn. Anyways, keeps up the good work author! Thanks a lot for this amazing work!
TheSilverQuill:Thank you for the honest feedback! Don't worry, there will be more action now that the tutorial arc (exposition) is over
What do you think of it so far, now that we are finished with the second arc and entering the third tomorrow? I really appreciate your opinion
Solterage:Personally, I don't really mind the lack of action. The pace is perfect for me. But well, I believe many people will probably expect a lot of action in this kind of novel, that's why I give that one a 4 star even though I wanted to give it 5. And yes, I could expect a lot of the action after reading the direction of the 2nd volumn. Anyways, keeps up the good work author! Thanks a lot for this amazing work!
Everything has been amazing so far, especially the action scenes, all of them are really great to read. One thing though, I think you dumped too much information during the resting scene before the goblin city's raid (What I mean by that is the information unrelated to goblin or troll such as the Gods). A little bit of that is fine, but if you added too much, the tensions for the readers will slowly died down instead of going up. IMO, the appropriated gods for each person conversion might be a bit better if it's discussed during their travel or adventure. Well, that's all I have to say for now. Keeps up the good work!
TheSilverQuill:What do you think of it so far, now that we are finished with the second arc and entering the third tomorrow? I really appreciate your opinion
Thanks! I'm glad to hear that. I'll make sure to keep a better eye out for the ******* so I keep it exactly where I want it in the future.
Solterage:Everything has been amazing so far, especially the action scenes, all of them are really great to read. One thing though, I think you dumped too much information during the resting scene before the goblin city's raid (What I mean by that is the information unrelated to goblin or troll such as the Gods). A little bit of that is fine, but if you added too much, the tensions for the readers will slowly died down instead of going up. IMO, the appropriated gods for each person conversion might be a bit better if it's discussed during their travel or adventure. Well, that's all I have to say for now. Keeps up the good work!
TheSilverQuill:Thanks! I'm glad to hear that. I'll make sure to keep a better eye out for the ******* so I keep it exactly where I want it in the future.