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wanderer_of_novels
wanderer_of_novelsLv66yr
2018-10-06 04:11

this story is absolute garbage. the authour can't write for ****. there's zero character or story development. that world building is non existent,

The Overlord - Naruto Fanfiction (COMPLETED)

ElionAVL
4.0
53 Chs

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ElionAVL
ElionAVLAuthor

So basically, you want me to make development in the first 4 chapters, do **** in the first four chapters, start to mention every **** of an already created world build by the actual Naruto Series, want me to upload more than 4 chapters daily, and then tell me it's absolute garbage, when your fucking nickname makes no sense. Wanderer Of Novels.

6yr
wanderer_of_novels
wanderer_of_novelsLv6

mate, i don't need more than 4 chapters to tell that your story is garbage.

6yr
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Endless_Clouds
Endless_CloudsLv5

journey as the endless clouds

wanderer_of_novels:mate, i don't need more than 4 chapters to tell that your story is garbage.
6yr
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BreezyNovels
BreezyNovelsLv5

OP MC = Check Cool Crap= Check Above Average storybuilding while some stuff remains canon = Check. Would recommend i love this fanfic. Its above average quality at the least. My opinion though. Check it out for yourself.

6yr

ElionAVL
ElionAVLAuthor

There's a minimum of 7 chapters weekly in this novel. It's about a very op mc, who has practically any ability he wants to have, and a companion, named Kurai, a powerful tailed beast, stronger than Juubi, estimated to have 13 Tails, but is not his limit.

6yr
G0DLess
G0DLessLv6

Seems like a very interesting fiction. Mc is basically god and can do what ever he wants. If you like OP mc this could be for you. I’ve only read to chapter 7, but i’m Liking it already. I just hope he doesn’t get nerfed or put some stupid restrictions on himself just because he doesn’t want to stand out to much.

6yr
YesorNo
YesorNoLv5

Writing quality and update stability are good= 4 stars. The story is basically whatever popped into the author's mind on that day... seems unplanned and with no underlying themes. = 2 stars. Character design= Very poor. Not only does the guy have infinite power he has zero motivation. He might as well not exist. Being OP itself is not the problem... interesting OP characters need some trait that makes them relatable, substituting the loss of ******* due to the reader knowing that nothing threatens them. But this guy is bland as ****. = 1 star World background = 4 stars... Naruto fanfic so the world has been directly lifted from it without much modification... the shinto pantheon is mentioned which is rare... good job but could be better.

6yr
Atryx10
Atryx10Lv13

I have genuinely no fucking clue what the goals of the MC are, nor what's going on. Even if I had any clue about what's going on, it's somewhat of an average story.

6yr
JManM
JManMLv5

I didn't read too far into the story, but from the chapter titles ahead of where I left off there was little likelyhood of the situation changing from the boring state it was in. The MC is infinitely powerful and completely apathetic about what is going on. If he doesn't care why would the audience?

6yr
_EMI_
_EMI_Lv4

Other than the fact that M.C is a bit too overpowered, everything else about this novel is perfect. Keep up the good work. I think that it would be interesting if M.C travel to other worlds like seven deadly sins or some cultivation world so that M.C would at least face some challenges. Something like god of slaughter or heck.. even great demon king. I shall seal the heaven would be nice as well.

6yr
TheTrollMaster
TheTrollMasterLv4

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM! AND DONT FORGET THAT FUUUUU AND ALSO INCEST ISSSSSSSS WIIIIINCEEEST DINT FORGET THE BIG SISTA

6yr
Padawan1234
Padawan1234Lv5

Really liking the story so far, I think it's really high quality as well, I'd like to see some romance, interested in how a 1000 year old virgin would do,,😂😂

6yr
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