Review Detail of Clara_the_fish in End of the Magic Era
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Hmm, the novel isn't bad, exactly. It just feels like the author didn't really know which perspective to write from. I read the first 10 chapters and at least four of them were dedicated to one person's POV (point of view), even though that person wasn't the MC. Another thing is that the author makes the MC extremely unrealistic. Lots of MCs are unrealistically powerful, but I think most of them went through a grueling process before getting so OP; like in "Genius Doctor Black Belly Miss," the FL went through a lot before she could get her title as a genius doctor. The MC here just reads a couple of old books and is suddenly able to concoct amazing potions. It isn't a terrible idea, but it definitely isn't great, either, and it certainly doesn't make the novel more interesting. It would have been more interesting if the novel started with the process or something.
End of the Magic Era
Zhuang Bifan
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ThrustThunder:At least in other reincarnation novels the MC get's some form of game breaking cheat: a System, a Biochip, a Magical Library *Something*! This guy just read a few advanced books in a library anyone had access to and now he's suddenly Leylin 2.0. SMH
ArtistaFeel:Wanna try something different? Try this! "Lyricist: Her Revenge" I'm sure you'll love it.
somemof your points aren't valid however weak the connection is author clearly states the reason for his op magic is nothing but theory a system raised up to the peak by research and experiments. Mc come.back from the peak of his era he has complete formulas recipes etc.. you may never back a cake but read a baking book and you will gain the knowledge simple as that he has the knowledge and proofed theories and formulas etc soooo
