3.5 for now update was slow. Is this going to be like other chinese reincarnated fanfic on marvel and etc? And so boastful and always say how chinese culture and china superior to another country and have mild to heavy bashing some other country like japan and others? I was assume like this coz I always read that kind of attitude on fanfic which chinese man reincarnated on some american man and always tell how superior china was on everything, for example like Marvels Immortal Throne, Marvels the King and many more. And I always drop that kind of fic when I saw signs of that. I hope this fic too didn't leave the path like others.

Interesting... I'll let the chapters build up first, but if you don't drop it and it turns out good then you'll have my support. Also my stones. Depends on how good it is.

Reveal spoiler

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is this good in later chapters?? early chapters are very bad.....girls are brainless around MC.... characters aren't thinking straight... conversations are very much a mess....even world background is a mess.....scene break are very confusing.... grammar and spelling is also bad. Concept is very good but... presentation is bad.

waste of time at the beginning he went to school and after 4 chapters he was still at school and I stopped reading it irrelevant information plus mc is kinda dumb if you have lived to lived and in one you are a God your facial expression shouldn't change When your thinking i understand that he doesn't have powers but mental things should be there and Autor only says he has spiky black hair that's it

the name reminded me of a joke from tfs, here ill share it with you guys: Vegeta: As for me, I will find a level beyond a Super Saiyan! Tien: ...So, what? Like a "Mega Saiyan"? "Ultra Saiyan"? Vegeta: ...You're mocking me— Tien: "Maximum Over-Saiyan"! Vegeta: F**k off, Triclo**! (flies away)

Not bad but I was wondering if there's going to polygamy or a harem in this? Cuz most fanfics have them and it get's boring when they all have the same aspects.

While i like a slow paced story, this is slowly make me bored, what i mean is it is ok to give credit to side character but a good story will also make the development of the MC clear it is not training maniac if you think it is what i mean. But hey this story is pretty interesting with DBZ and Marvel crossover but i remember this is a fan fiction, while i like slow paced story but i worry for the continually of this story like i doubt some fan fic can finish it's story with it's slow paced development, even only minority of story in this platform reach 200+ chap. The grammar for me is average for non english speaker (like me), character design is much but too shallow, world background too small and too little surprise element. I think that's it from me. Hope this review can give the story better development 😄

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