webnovel
Hunter_101
Hunter_101Lv134yr
2020-11-20 04:09

waste of time at the beginning he went to school and after 4 chapters he was still at school and I stopped reading it irrelevant information plus mc is kinda dumb if you have lived to lived and in one you are a God your facial expression shouldn't change When your thinking i understand that he doesn't have powers but mental things should be there and Autor only says he has spiky black hair that's it

Marvel's Ultra-Saiyan

Shaikh_Tohaa
4.6
80 Chs

Liked by 3 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
RionSteiner
RionSteinerLv5

3.5 for now update was slow. Is this going to be like other chinese reincarnated fanfic on marvel and etc? And so boastful and always say how chinese culture and china superior to another country and have mild to heavy bashing some other country like japan and others? I was assume like this coz I always read that kind of attitude on fanfic which chinese man reincarnated on some american man and always tell how superior china was on everything, for example like Marvels Immortal Throne, Marvels the King and many more. And I always drop that kind of fic when I saw signs of that. I hope this fic too didn't leave the path like others.

4yr

Imperious_Rex
Imperious_RexLv6

Interesting... I'll let the chapters build up first, but if you don't drop it and it turns out good then you'll have my support. Also my stones. Depends on how good it is.

6yr
Ferro
FerroLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr
Madya_D_Yatna
Madya_D_YatnaLv5

Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ... Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ... Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ... Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ... Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ... Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ... Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ... Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ... Keep'em up author ... 🎉🎆 ...

6yr
Alien_Space_Bat
Alien_Space_BatLv5

is this good in later chapters?? early chapters are very bad.....girls are brainless around MC.... characters aren't thinking straight... conversations are very much a mess....even world background is a mess.....scene break are very confusing.... grammar and spelling is also bad. Concept is very good but... presentation is bad.

4yr
Neydomus
NeydomusLv12

the name reminded me of a joke from tfs, here ill share it with you guys: Vegeta: As for me, I will find a level beyond a Super Saiyan! Tien: ...So, what? Like a "Mega Saiyan"? "Ultra Saiyan"? Vegeta: ...You're mocking me— Tien: "Maximum Over-Saiyan"! Vegeta: F**k off, Triclo**! (flies away)

4yr
SpoiledSecrets
SpoiledSecretsLv5

Not bad but I was wondering if there's going to polygamy or a harem in this? Cuz most fanfics have them and it get's boring when they all have the same aspects.

3yr
Edgelord69
Edgelord69Lv4

While i like a slow paced story, this is slowly make me bored, what i mean is it is ok to give credit to side character but a good story will also make the development of the MC clear it is not training maniac if you think it is what i mean. But hey this story is pretty interesting with DBZ and Marvel crossover but i remember this is a fan fiction, while i like slow paced story but i worry for the continually of this story like i doubt some fan fic can finish it's story with it's slow paced development, even only minority of story in this platform reach 200+ chap. The grammar for me is average for non english speaker (like me), character design is much but too shallow, world background too small and too little surprise element. I think that's it from me. Hope this review can give the story better development 😄

4yr
Darith_Sky
Darith_SkyLv11

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

4yr
Related Stories

Naruto: Drop System

Good news: I've crossed into the anime world of my dreams. Bad news: It's the Naruto world, and I'm an ordinary orphan without a bloodline limit, attending the same class as Naruto and Sasuke. Just as Yagyu was getting ready to be a minor character and trying to survive the Konoha Crush Plan, Pain's assault on Konoha, and the Fourth Great Ninja War... During a taijutsu match at the ninja academy, Yagyu defeated Naruto, who was still a dead last, and suddenly a golden light orb appeared in front of him. Defeating enemies and getting loot—turns out he has a golden finger (cheat ability) after all! No bloodline limit? No problem, as long as others have it! Not gifted in ninjutsu? No worries, as long as others know it! Can't get the loot in one try? Then tie him up and beat him every day until it drops! During the Fourth Great Ninja War, Madara, who had regained both his eyes and reached Sage of Six Paths power, looked at Yagyu in disbelief: "Why can you use Limbo too?" "It's simple, you just dropped it earlier," Yagyu said, activating his Rinnegan. --x-- This is a translated novel, and you can find the raw version by the name: 人在木叶，开局掉落阿修罗查克拉 --x-- Do you want to support our translation? Join our Patreon! patreon.com/rosewhisky

RoseWhisky · Anime & Comics
4.1
119 Chs

Frieren: Reincarnated As a Demon

[Read Advanced Chapters On My Patreon: patreon.com/Erovia ] Synopsis:- He was reincarnated as a demon with extraordinary talents and a long lifespan. Though born with living parents, he became an orphan and had to fend for himself, always cautious of both his own kind and humans. Still, it didn't bother him too much. At least when he was three, he suddenly gained a system—though it turned out to be less useful than expected. Even so, it allowed him to travel back in time, where he befriended Frieren. But soon, he realized that his friend had a strong prejudice against demons. Thankfully, the little sister from his tribe, Aura, whom he'd known since birth, had become quite successful. However, their relationship was a bit complicated—he used to boss her around as a child. That wasn't a major issue, though. He even met the strongest hero, but... the hero died a little too early. As he moved between the human and demon worlds, he gradually realized that neither side could be trusted. "There's no choice, I'll have to rely on myself." And so, he set a new goal for himself: kill the current demon king and become the new demon king—tentatively. Please Note: I do not own anything in this fanfiction. The copyright belongs to their respective creators.

Erovia · Anime & Comics
4.8
143 Chs

Throne Of Supreme

[Previous title: Demon Slayer: let me be a human again.] Aoki dies and is reincarnated in another world, where he begins a new life with his master, a skilled hunter. However, an unfortunate event leads Aoki to a startling realization: the world he has reincarnated into is the one depicted in Demon Slayer, a popular anime from his previous life. To make matters worse, Aoki has been turned into a demon. Now, his sole goal is to reclaim his humanity while retaining the powers he has gained. But is it really that simple? Can Aoki turn back into a human, or will his growing strength pull him further away from his humanity? This is the story of Aoki, a man who journeys through different worlds, gaining incredible powers. This is just an translation original work: 鬼灭：请让我当个人吧 If you want an early access join my patreon:- patreon.com/Erovia 50 Advanced Chapters

Erovia · Anime & Comics
4.7
276 Chs

In DxD with Sign-In System!

Transmigrated into DxD World—Kuoh Town, Hibari Kyoya. an average student, spent 18 agonizing years in the world fully aware of the dangers, knowing he is utterly powerless in a world of gods and monsters, Until... [Ding! Sign-In System loading… 20%… 50%… 80%… 100%.] Destiny, it seems.. has a cruel sense of humor. A [Sign-In System], long overdue, finally bursts to life within him, offering a chance at survival, a chance at power... [Ding! Congratulations! You have received the Rainbow-Grade Gift Bag!] ... He then started completing System's tasks, accumulating even greater rewards. [Ding! Task completed. Reward: Perfect Rumble-Rumble Fruit (Weakness to water Removed).] [Ding! Task completed. Congratulations to the host for obtaining the Flying Thunder God Technique!]

DragonnX · Anime & Comics
4.6
30 Chs

Naruto: Unlimited Kekkai Genkai

Ishigami Hara traveled across the ninja world and eventually became a descendant of a small family in Konoha, one that had intermarried with members on the fringes of several major ninja clans. Though he carried the bloodlines of these powerful clans, he had never managed to awaken any of his inherited abilities. However, there was hope—thanks to a daily settlement system that could transform his routine activities into unique skills... [Washing] became a skill, turning him into Konoha's first male incubus, with maximum charm. [Eating] became a skill, giving him a stomach like a furnace, able to consume anything. [Sleeping] became a skill, allowing him to bring back the ghost of an Uchiha from the underworld through his dreams. [Exercise] became a skill, which activated his dormant bloodline. When his body was infused with the Chakra of the Uchiha ghost, he astonishingly awakened both the Byakugan and Sharingan. Thus, a ninja with swirling red hair, Byakugan in his left eye, and Sharingan in his right eye emerged. This is a translation I do not own any of the characters Orginal: 木叶：从每日结算起创造无限血继

CosmicKaminari · Anime & Comics
4.8
130 Chs
Login