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phoenix_8888Lv155yr
2019-07-13 23:41

I'll be dumping this story pretty soon. Why because I am not a fan of the characters and it falls in the typical "no offense Chinese modern rebirth" story lines to which at first the FL seems appealing but then you have a beyond alpha ML who took & will be taking romantic/sexual advantage of a 15 year old, she does nothing about this. To make matters worse, its looked on as okay with the elders. There are so many things wrong about this on several levels, its not funny. I am glad that the FL is taking proactive steps in changing her life for the better. But everything else sucks big time and its the usual romance trope when its abuse on several levels. Especially with the drugs, rape etc. some of which is condone and richly supported by the readers here. Here's the reality - THIS IS WRONG WRONG WRONG WRONG, and I hate the fact that these stories are trying to let the reader feel that its right worse when its ML as a form of support of his character. His character sucks big time when or if he does these things, especially to a ****. Its not love, its a power play, and then you have him overly possessive to boot. This is why women will never get the respect, sincerity or appreciation they deserve. This is why few women do not report being sexually assaulted etc. its because there is no real punishment or consequence for the male worse the ML. There is nothing done and its condoned and given as a reward, yet the woman is called to fault. My grandstanding stops here. I see the high rating, reviews and COMPLETELY disagree with it. But sadly these type of stories is very popular among readers at least 70% female. I have read and am reading more quality rebirth/reborn stories which truly deserves a higher rating than this crappy story. I had to be fair and give it good ratings for translation & stability. But other than that, this story is a dump for me.

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Clara_the_fish
Clara_the_fishLv10

Love your eloquence on this and I totally agree. I’m skipping all of the chapters with FL’s interaction with what is probably the ML because it is just absolutely disgusting to see.

twistedpenguin
twistedpenguinLv11

Hello. Can you suggest some quality rebirth/reborn/transmigration stories? I've already read some and I'm finding a hard time finding for moreee.

phoenix_8888
phoenix_8888Lv15

These three are are what I call surprises that you never expect (all originals), you'll end up liking just about everything about them - (1) Flowers Bloom in the Battlefield completed 400+ chapters, be prepared to spend 6-7ss per chapter, its worth it (2) Circumventing Fate - transmigration the FL is no doctor/assassin etc she has her wits and its funny as heck, there is no family betrayal crap they actually care for each other - updates 3 per week (3) Power up artist yang - transmigration fun fun fun, with touch of reality its going SS soon so I suggest you spend 3 days marathoning on this 80+ chapters - updates 5 per week. Once you start reading them you will be surprised at the rating wondering why do they get those ranking when they are waay much better than some out here. Bonus- Granting you a second life , its now premium as at chapter 96 but its a good story (7-8 SS). Although I do not really support this site SS policy, for original stories, I have no problem supporting them provided that the content is good. However for translated ones, its a no go as I can always find them somewhere else. Hope this helps.

twistedpenguin:Hello. Can you suggest some quality rebirth/reborn/transmigration stories? I've already read some and I'm finding a hard time finding for moreee.
twistedpenguin
twistedpenguinLv11

Sad to say but I've already read/still reading them. But still, thanks for the suggestions and for the tip at the end haha. Cheers!

diyon
diyonLv4

Great😍😍😍

phoenix_8888:These three are are what I call surprises that you never expect (all originals), you'll end up liking just about everything about them - (1) Flowers Bloom in the Battlefield completed 400+ chapters, be prepared to spend 6-7ss per chapter, its worth it (2) Circumventing Fate - transmigration the FL is no doctor/assassin etc she has her wits and its funny as heck, there is no family betrayal crap they actually care for each other - updates 3 per week (3) Power up artist yang - transmigration fun fun fun, with touch of reality its going SS soon so I suggest you spend 3 days marathoning on this 80+ chapters - updates 5 per week. Once you start reading them you will be surprised at the rating wondering why do they get those ranking when they are waay much better than some out here. Bonus- Granting you a second life , its now premium as at chapter 96 but its a good story (7-8 SS). Although I do not really support this site SS policy, for original stories, I have no problem supporting them provided that the content is good. However for translated ones, its a no go as I can always find them somewhere else. Hope this helps.
Gresha
GreshaLv13

I only knew the bonus novel. Unfortunately, the updates are unsteady. Thank you! I really like a good rebirth/reborn story, but hard to find one. Most of them are good initially, but the plot derails after 10s of chapters and have to drop β€˜em.

phoenix_8888:These three are are what I call surprises that you never expect (all originals), you'll end up liking just about everything about them - (1) Flowers Bloom in the Battlefield completed 400+ chapters, be prepared to spend 6-7ss per chapter, its worth it (2) Circumventing Fate - transmigration the FL is no doctor/assassin etc she has her wits and its funny as heck, there is no family betrayal crap they actually care for each other - updates 3 per week (3) Power up artist yang - transmigration fun fun fun, with touch of reality its going SS soon so I suggest you spend 3 days marathoning on this 80+ chapters - updates 5 per week. Once you start reading them you will be surprised at the rating wondering why do they get those ranking when they are waay much better than some out here. Bonus- Granting you a second life , its now premium as at chapter 96 but its a good story (7-8 SS). Although I do not really support this site SS policy, for original stories, I have no problem supporting them provided that the content is good. However for translated ones, its a no go as I can always find them somewhere else. Hope this helps.
Nch
NchLv11

Totally agree.

noobielliom
noobielliomLv14

More suggestion please!! I only read Power Up Artist Yang on your list. Another that I read is 'The Long-Awaited Mr. Han; Strike Back, Proud Goddess; Imperfect Desires; Mr. CEO's Woman' I like the MC character there but suddenly the SBPG got crazy drama going on... Also TLAMH got crazy super crazy family that never stop bothering the MC....

phoenix_8888
phoenix_8888Lv15

Try Honey: the empire's treasure - its hilarious, the typhoon's wife - despite the grammar/typos its good, love struck- sequel to typhoon wife, circumventing fate is good though a bit slow later on, Rin, Serendipity is nice and completed - make sure you have enough ss. These are all good, I believe that you will enjoy them.

noobielliom:More suggestion please!! I only read Power Up Artist Yang on your list. Another that I read is 'The Long-Awaited Mr. Han; Strike Back, Proud Goddess; Imperfect Desires; Mr. CEO's Woman' I like the MC character there but suddenly the SBPG got crazy drama going on... Also TLAMH got crazy super crazy family that never stop bothering the MC....
noobielliom
noobielliomLv14

Yeaaay thank you thank you!! Gonna search all those stories. Thankfully there is discount for 24 days so I'm up for many stories 😍

phoenix_8888:Try Honey: the empire's treasure - its hilarious, the typhoon's wife - despite the grammar/typos its good, love struck- sequel to typhoon wife, circumventing fate is good though a bit slow later on, Rin, Serendipity is nice and completed - make sure you have enough ss. These are all good, I believe that you will enjoy them.
phoenix_8888
phoenix_8888Lv15

Forgot to add an unsong novel that is if you like Korean type historical - try My ultimate ambition, not a rebirth or transmigration. Its free for the most part, very few people comment on the story but its good. Good luck and let me what you think of the proposed selections.

noobielliom:Yeaaay thank you thank you!! Gonna search all those stories. Thankfully there is discount for 24 days so I'm up for many stories 😍
Daoist_Paradox
Daoist_ParadoxLv4

There are no 'normal' novels which can be actually read. Pick up any novel with FL and you will find: 01. A smart*ss FL, specially one who is an assasin/prodigy doctor/prodigy investigator/prodigy forensic ***, etc.(in short, daughter of common houses are not allowed. They need to have some complex background) 02. A cold faced male character(s). 03. Mary Sue 04. Gary Stu 05. At least 1 rape scene. 06. At least 1 molesting scene (in each chapter) These are the basics....

Reeses74
Reeses74Lv14

I’m sorry to say this but have you look at the world around you, have you read β€œRomeo and Juliet, she was 12 and Romeo 17 and they had sex while the nanny was outside the door. I have yet to see Si Yiyan rape the female lead. I didn’t see you say a word about the traps the stepsister and stepmother setup for the FL, to be raped in a closet by a man they drugged at a party. I don’t mind Si Yiyan β€˜s possessiveness that nature is pretty normal. If you read the whole story, then you know that the majority of the evil things done to this 12 yr old girl are done by her stepmom and stepdaughter and Xia Ruya, let’s not even discuss what the rich girls at school tried to do to Xenya, rape, and attempted murder. Notice all the friends around Xenya are older than her. How many of us have seen a 12 yr in high school? Considering this story is not real, why take it so seriously, this story has nothing to do with why women don’t report. They can tell the difference from fiction and fact in a story.

Risulily
RisulilyLv14

my plan as well. don't like such disgusting men

Clara_the_fish:Love your eloquence on this and I totally agree. I’m skipping all of the chapters with FL’s interaction with what is probably the ML because it is just absolutely disgusting to see.
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