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This could be such a good novel if it wasn’t filled with unnecessary info-dumps, there are so many details that nobody cares about! In this novel there is an interesting story and the author knows what he he writing about and on Webnovel this is quite rare, but the story is so filled with info-dumps that it becomes too slow and boring. It should be entirely rewritten and all the chapters should have at least half the length, and the story would be still slow. All of this without considering the bad grammar that makes the reading process even more exhausting.

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Starship commander trapped in a fantasy world

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