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Gogunam
GogunamLv26yr
2018-10-11 09:09

Good novel. I like the heroine very much. I'm really excited how the story would develop. Tho I hope the release would be more stable. Fighting!! 😊

NoGift

Tyramisu
4.7
242 Chs

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Tyramisu
TyramisuAuthor

Thank you for this review! :)

6yr
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sobhe
sobheLv10

Yess!!

5yr
Sharon_Nnatu
Sharon_NnatuLv2

Pls how do I unlocke the chapter am having problem with it

4yr
sailor_satorn
sailor_satornLv12

i like to read this book but the only question is the update all my god girl the update today is three days my god that's too that's too much i want i think i'm going to love this but still i can't read this because the update of my god update not so but i think this is a nice book to read specially this quarantine days

4yr
sailor_satorn
sailor_satornLv12

you have to buy a coin girl you can use gcash or and 7-eleven or something so you can buy it coin and then you can open the next chapter

Sharon_Nnatu:Pls how do I unlocke the chapter am having problem with it
4yr
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Tyramisu
TyramisuAuthor

Hi! Author here! 😊 Since we're ten chapters in, I will be completely shameless and give myself a full 5 star rating. 😅 Tho I know I don't deserve that since my chapter release is pretty unstable. 😣 But still, as the saying goes, love your own. So there. 😊 I hope everyone who read this story could leave a review. I would very much be happy to read your opinion about the story. Don't worry, I accept criticisms (as long as they're critical, of course). 😊 And lastly, thank you to everyone who still sticks to this story despite the unstable release. 😅 Love you guys! Muah! 😚

6yr

Sighgray
SighgrayLv10

I know it's still too early to write a review but who cares. I just love this story. The world building is very unique. Kind of like a combination between Western and Eastern fantasy. I also love the whole transmigration/gender-bender thing. I enjoy the MC's character. She's kind of pragmatic, which I like. But I do hope she'll grow as the story goes. And I really wonder who will be the ML. 😊😊😊

6yr
Zephir_
Zephir_Lv5

Waaa .... I discovered a treasure! This novel is incredible and makes you delve into the story. Uuhh if at least the releases were more stable and frequent .... Anyway, give it a try and you will not regret it!

6yr
Pham
PhamLv10

I hope you wont drop this novel because I love the story. The characters are written out well and i feel like this story has alot of potential. Ofc i know it is still too early to judge. Anyways i added this to my library and hope to read more of this novel.

6yr
PettyOfficer
PettyOfficerLv6

Overall 3.2/5 If you’re ok with a passive MC who has people falling for her left and right, go ahead and read. It’s interesting when characters don’t step all over the MC and hog the limelight with their over-the-top obsession. Don’t expect the MC to do anything but the minimum required of them. It’s for “comedic” and “evocative” purposes. Writing quality 3/5 There are occasional errors when the author switches from past to present tense. You can ignore the errors, but they’re a constant irritation in the background. Stability of updating 5/5 92 chapters in 20 days. Dang, son. Maybe the author needs to slow their roll and plan out a bit more. Each chapter is probably over 2,500 words. That’s 230,000 words. You should be satisfied with half that amount and if you demand more, I’m going to flame you on the author’s behalf. Story development 3/5 It would’ve been higher, but the characters keep interrupting with their obsession with the MC. It got tiring real fast when so many strong people came out of the woodwork and obsessed over the MC. Character design 1/5 Everyone important is OP, especially the MC who was crafted as a Mary Sue. She even had no ties to the world, which made her the ideal person to revolutionize the otherworld. Sadly, the MC loses any ability to make those impressive inventions after transmigrating to another world. That is, except that magic suppressing bracelet or whatever. What’s worse is that she latches onto the body’s family despite being characterized as independent because she “owes” them for giving her another chance. Seriously? The original owner died stupidly for not listening to her mother. Even if you’re caring for her family for convenience, the least she could do is try to control her wild sister’s behavior. You don’t live in a bubble. It’s a dangerous world of magic and monsters. It’s really tragic since all we’ve got to show for the MC’s intelligence is their aloofness and confidence as a child. Listen to the MC go on about dissecting things without the MC making tech for self-defense. See as the MC gets into dangerous situations, but never actually be in danger because their transmigrated soul rejects magic and any threat is too weak or already fell in love with the MC. I had high hopes when the MC talked about skipping town on her kingdom for being looked down as a talentless nobody. She wanted to start a business on her own. But when no one respects her status as a duke, I’m losing all confidence in her, especially when she’s incredibly passive. She doesn’t control her sister, doesn’t make any defenses when threatened, doesn’t make tech for a distraction or toy, and overly relies on an unknown power that might give out at any time when negating magic. Let’s not mention the potential love interests that appear, being excessively powerful and unreasonable. I’m getting flashbacks to ”His Genius Wife Is A Superstar” where the characters step all over the supposedly strong and independent MC. It’s infuriating and depressing. World background 4/5 There’s enough to go around when the characters aren’t busy pouting about who gets the MC. There are a few things I want to debate, but maybe the author addresses the problems or I missed something. Either way, it’s a pretty slow and steady build.

5yr
LenDeRome
LenDeRomeLv14

Tbh I'm kinda hoping that Argent to marry a girl (no hate pls) because I'm kinda tired of reading girl impersonating a boy getting married off to a guy after revealing it's gender but if the author likes it that way I have no objections (and BTW I will not drop this book just because my likings didn't come to as planned) and I love this novel

5yr
kimtrg
kimtrgLv4

This book is very entertaining, and refreshing if you haven’t read too many transmigration novels. I like the practicality of the main character, even if we don’t know what her entire plan is yet. She’s bold, logical and decisive! I also like how she had a hypothesis about how she ended up in the new world, and her composure didn’t falter as she is very mature. She also convinced other characters using a practical mindset. This novel is very enjoyable and I hope that there will be more updates soon! I don’t know the updating schedule so I put a three star.

6yr
njugu68
njugu68Lv15

Narration and character development is portrayed so well, you feel like actually watching a movie. The FL is strong, independent and has a strong family bond. The impressive thing it leaves us guessing on who is the ML.. I am in ch 146 and up to now, apart from the family nobody knows that the MC is a female and male disguise. Try this story it is definitely worth a read. I am looking forward to more.

5yr
35713
35713Lv4

This is honestly one of the best series that I have read in my life. I love the fact that everyone assumes she is a boy, but is actually a girl. There are three ships but my favorite would be winter since they have a similar personality. This series constantly surprises me and intrigues me to the point where I can't wait for the next chapter. The author never ceases to amaze me, and I hope others can support the author as well.💜

5yr
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