Review Detail of BAJJ in Azeal Neralum

The writing quality is good. Though there are little mistakes but it can all be fixed. It was fun. but sometimes it gives too much information that actually takes time to digest (slowpoke) there are loopholes in the in the first few chapters but I can youre improving. About the MC is he a childish kind of father? He's cute. Lol. All in all, your story is good and it makes me want to read the next chapter. Good job👍🏻