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ARGAS
ARGASAuthor4yrARGAS

Hello! I'm the author here giving myself a three because I think that there is fair deal of stuff to improve. I don't intend to get into super exaggerated descriptions like "glorious, glamorous or planet-breaking, etc". Not really of fan of that. If you enjoy the story then please leave a review, if there is any issue such as grammar or plot holes and such, leave a comment and I will try my best to fix it.

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Maiden Of The Splitting Moon

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ARGAS
ARGASAuthorARGAS

Forgot to add, yes, this is a cultivation story but it's not going to be a huge element.

Redturbans
RedturbansLv4Redturbans

You should at least give yourself a 4.Your writing has most definitely improved a lot you deserve it really . Keep up the good work :)

Brammm
BrammmLv13Brammm

i love your story i think it deserves more then 3 stars i would at least rate it 4,5 stars but probebly 5 stars compared to other storys on this site . as for feedback i think you could add more information about how elemental talent works after 270 chapters in i think i get how it works but i still have doubts over if im correct.

ARGAS
ARGASAuthorARGAS

Will take it to note. The early chapters are a bit rough and will be redone later to better introduce the world mechanics. In terms of elemental talent, you could relate it to magic in a sense. You would be super proficient in one element and be able to use just that. But with something like the "Dao" where anything under the sun can be considered, it gets complicated because you could practice another "Dao" to compliment your main. It gets very open-ended which puts me in a love/hate reationship with it. The concept of "Dao" gives a sense that you could do anything but that also means that it can get very complicated.

Brammm:i love your story i think it deserves more then 3 stars i would at least rate it 4,5 stars but probebly 5 stars compared to other storys on this site . as for feedback i think you could add more information about how elemental talent works after 270 chapters in i think i get how it works but i still have doubts over if im correct.
Hastatii
HastatiiLv13Hastatii

I have a question If it has a no romance tag why does it say fantasy romance in the genre??? I’m confused 🤣

ARGAS
ARGASAuthorARGAS

Yeah, unfortunately if you have a female lead, literally all the genre options have romance next to it. They don't have a fantasy only option. Waiting for Webnovel to change that but it doesn't seem like it.

Hastatii:I have a question If it has a no romance tag why does it say fantasy romance in the genre??? I’m confused 🤣
Esha_k
Esha_kLv13Esha_k

Hii!! I recently found your novel and this is one of the most refreshing stories ever !! Currently obsessed with your book ! Just wanted to ask if you could do a mass relese for the next chapters ?☺️☺️

Hastatii
HastatiiLv13Hastatii

How sad :(

ARGAS:Yeah, unfortunately if you have a female lead, literally all the genre options have romance next to it. They don't have a fantasy only option. Waiting for Webnovel to change that but it doesn't seem like it.
Raven_Master
Raven_MasterLv13Raven_Master

so no romance????

ARGAS:Yeah, unfortunately if you have a female lead, literally all the genre options have romance next to it. They don't have a fantasy only option. Waiting for Webnovel to change that but it doesn't seem like it.
Abyssally
AbyssallyLv3Abyssally

No romance, thankfully...

Raven_Master:so no romance????
BlueEyedOracle
BlueEyedOracleLv15BlueEyedOracle

*every

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Shirabe
ShirabeLv5Shirabe

female protagonist tag??

ARGAS:Yeah, unfortunately if you have a female lead, literally all the genre options have romance next to it. They don't have a fantasy only option. Waiting for Webnovel to change that but it doesn't seem like it.
ARGAS
ARGASAuthorARGAS

didn't think about that

Shirabe:female protagonist tag??
Shirabe
ShirabeLv5Shirabe

ARGAS:didn't think about that
Jaheim_Weeden_4636
Jaheim_Weeden_4636Lv13Jaheim_Weeden_4636

I like your story and rate it 4.5. I feel it would be a bit more amazing if you added romance later down the road once she becomes strong enough to not fear losing someone again.

Joshyisboss120
Joshyisboss120Lv14Joshyisboss120

Hi Argas just wondering if you will add more continents other than the current 3, possibly a island Archipelago, or a lost continent with a mixture of humans, demons, beast people, maybe an angel or celestial species or a elemental species born from different elements. I love the adventure and world building parts, where the world keeps feeling larger and larger. keep up the good work, love the book so far.

ARGAS
ARGASAuthorARGAS

maybe :)

Joshyisboss120:Hi Argas just wondering if you will add more continents other than the current 3, possibly a island Archipelago, or a lost continent with a mixture of humans, demons, beast people, maybe an angel or celestial species or a elemental species born from different elements. I love the adventure and world building parts, where the world keeps feeling larger and larger. keep up the good work, love the book so far.
TheNoobGamer_2019
TheNoobGamer_2019Lv11TheNoobGamer_2019

This story is amazing. First time I’ve paid to read chapters on this site(That means it’s just that good). Keep up the amazing work.

ARGAS
ARGASAuthorARGAS

once its finished, yes.

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IntanLestari
IntanLestariLv11IntanLestari

is this transmigration story?