i think there might have been a mistake during translation a griffin is a beast with a lions body and an eagles head .

i think he is using his telekinisis or earth control to control the alloy and use it as a weapon

he is not spending the alloy just using it, of course this does create the risk of it being stolen or lost

they arent veterans -_- they are people who quit being a beastmaster pretty quikly after their ewakening becouse they awakened a weak beast .

how does carmins use of the bloodline work is it a temperary benifit or a permamanet boost i also recall giving/losing blood is not the same as giving your bloodline so did jake give carmen his bloodline or just his blood

im very curious what dou's shun long comprehended in his past life

all experiences between them are shared thats why the copy can be used to study insription while the original learns to fight.

i think your story is great. as for ideas i think you could incorperate the difrent levels of hell into diffrent abileties. for example aperently one level of hell is frozen which could give an ice abiletie

this chapter leaves me with 2 questions was the 4th active abilety ever revealed(i cant remember reading about it) and the same question for the peak abilety

even is she had a good reasen i hope she isnt just forgiven without redeeming herself first (as in either repaying the debt of soulstones or risking her life to save jake in an ordeal)

her martial soul has a luck passive

i would love for the story to in to the leadership direction (him having his ordeal team on their own floating island)

i have a couple of questions about the storage abilety, does he still have liquid alloy left to improve it(after using it to get 3 abiletys) and if he does how much storage does it give currently?

u need to remember there are many difrent ordeals held at the same time and very frequently , so there are more people who have won their ordeal and gotten there own extremly good reward . also many humans have a head start so some have already finished their 4th ordeal and recieved al the bonuses it gives. and as far as i understand it, his bloodline is currently far from its peak power the rank 8 just means it has a lot of growth potential.

shes figting inside a formation that seems to boost the snakes strength.(she could take it down but the snake was able to regenerate immediately) that's why she send loki and het copy ahead to undo the formation.

Just to be sure, is this the end of brice's ordeal?

i hope at least one of those cousins doesnt make it to a door

he has a very good reason for wanting to stay low key. an unknown enemy sent an assasin after him in the past. when sending an assasin the enemy sends an assasin they think is strong enough to deal with mc. since mc looks weaker the next assasin would be weaker and easier to deal with

i love your story i think it deserves more then 3 stars i would at least rate it 4,5 stars but probebly 5 stars compared to other storys on this site . as for feedback i think you could add more information about how elemental talent works after 270 chapters in i think i get how it works but i still have doubts over if im correct.

i can see het using this in the future to avoid going on dangerous missions, just sent her clone while she can laze around at school . she can even intervine if theres something the clone cant handle with swap